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Open Poetry #29

One time

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

0 posted 2003-11-14 05:43 PM

I warned you once
you chose to stand
and one time warned
you understand

that one time pushed
that one time, planned
was one times many
one thousand strands

I asked you once
where did you stand
you answered me
right where I am

I told you then
you're in my spot
and thunder brings
what rain forgot

[This message has been edited by Jason Lyle (11-14-2003 05:44 PM).]

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2003-11-14 06:36 PM

Jason~
My goodness ... this is VERY, VERY good~

'I told you then
you're in my spot
and thunder brings
what rain forgot'

I LOVE this~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

2 posted 2003-11-14 08:33 PM

I like this.

:-)

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-11-14 08:43 PM

Excellent!! I love it!
Hugs~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

4 posted 2003-11-14 08:44 PM

Kool write...enjoyed...jwesley

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