A. G. Bell's Curse ( masquerade for wranx's challenge)

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Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

0 posted 2003-11-14 12:23 PM

Apologies.. to the author it is intended to mimic....
I saw the message light
Blinking its cycloptic eye at me
And knew better than to pick up
But, did in some perverse desire
To think it was from a friend
Telling me you had met an untimely end
That came not unlike the end of us

Your voice still cuts with each syllable
And while I no longer bleed
There is still the sting of slicing flesh
To remind me I am in part human

“Just wanted you to know I was alive”

then dial tone
which sounded so much more pleasant
as it raked across my ears like the drone
of distant hueys

Next time
Save me the bad news

[This message has been edited by Cpat Hair (11-14-2003 12:35 PM).]

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-11-14 12:29 PM

ooooooo, this kinda looks like me...but not

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

2 posted 2003-11-14 12:39 PM

Now this, like a cold beer came right from the icebox....Very nicely done.

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

3 posted 2003-11-14 12:42 PM

Box! Best yet!

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Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2003-11-14 01:03 PM

I am somehow always warmed
even by the chill of the icebox

even if it isn't icebox
this is a totally COOOL write

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

5 posted 2003-11-14 01:07 PM

*smiling here*

Ron, you have done beautifully
so good in fact , it is 32 degrees here
*smile*
xxoo

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2003-11-14 01:38 PM

(smiles) Oh Ron, this is beautiful, sweet friend, it is very haunting but you tackle a slice of life so well and top it with whipped cream! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ron, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2003-11-14 01:45 PM

She's back? *wink*

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

8 posted 2003-11-14 01:58 PM

I love this cpat. I have no idea who it is...but I have not been around long enough to recognize everyone's unique styles yet. I read wranx's challenge...but I am not confident enough yet to attempt one myself...but I am enjoying reading everyone elses interpretations of their favorite writers.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

9 posted 2003-11-14 02:49 PM

yeah gotta be the icebox

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

10 posted 2003-11-14 10:41 PM

I agree that this is the Iceman
from beginning to end....

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