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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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But Today I am lost in my today, the winds penetrating my thoughts still. My pages torn, crumpled of failures, a casualty of mood. I wish for the touch that is unreachable. I wish for the breath that is unbreathable. I drew you long ago, the many erasures a muse to my words. But today I see myself alone, on an empty street, tattered from ware of you, grasping for the faded before undressing the petals that linger in fold, protecting what is to be. I am She, no more, no less, hollow in heart wondering the whys, no longer seeking fairy tales, a foreclosure on my being awaiting night's shadow to embrace and place me there, in the fade of you. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I am She, no more, no less, hollow in heart wondering the whys, no longer seeking fairy tales, a foreclosure on my being awaiting night's shadow to embrace and place me there, in the fade of you. Maybe and saying this only from my heart this is a good thing This was filled with more tools then not But that paragraph stuck out and opened my eyes the most. Thank you for sharing. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, I would have picked the same paragraph.  |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I'm split in half... part of me wishes I'd written this, and the rest wishes that no one had to. All the same, it's a beautiful piece of work, painful or no. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"I am She, no more, no less, hollow in heart wondering the whys," ~ Yes, you is that she And that's a good thing to be. You write from heart and eyes As you ponder, and wonder the whys.  EA |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice  |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
The writing flowed very well - a story of loneliness in wanting and realization of a dream not to be, completely told. Enjoyed! "If this grand panorama before me is what you call God...then God is not dead." |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
I am She, no more, no less, hollow in heart wondering the whys, no longer seeking fairy tales, a foreclosure on my being wondering and wondering, killing us with wonder, must we have to wonder so much? really could feel the thud of love here, good words |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
always touching me...yesterday, today, tomorrow |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) You are only half-right, as you are She and you are special but never, NEVER say you're hollow, for you are so much more! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, today let She be jubilant, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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