Open Poetry #29 |
The poetry of madness |
Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
When did the voices begin? I asked myself The madness tasting most delicious reminding of chocolate driving to throes of ecstasy and beyond Chaos were you not my lover in another life when we fornicated ourselves sprawled naked over much whine and thoughts of Dante under glass The voices oh the beautiful voices how they sing to me dance scream tantalizing with visions seducing with dream awaking me in a chaotic state of mental orgasm Dance with me sirens of madness partake of my soul muse of chaos lift me from the gravity of worldly boundary and the chains of normalcy Awaken me to the dawn of mad genius writing random mystic thoughts late into the midnight hour spilling the blood of my soul on parchment till I am no more human I am not man only a poem still being written. [This message has been edited by Brad Majors (11-14-2003 10:21 AM).] |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this was a recollection of moments in my life...how perfectly mundane is the maddness of those moments, yet so brilliantly astounding...arise ye souls...partake in the love I create for you...amounst the saddness and pain...those moments are given you to explain my presence...saith the Lord.. Silly? Perhaps, but thats what this wonderful poem spoke to me, in spite of all the confusion, pain, sorrow, loss. I'm sorry Brad, but I became lost in your words...reviewing a very special time in my life...thank you for that, and for the brillance of your words. |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
I am not man only a poem still being written. wonderful trip you take us on, I have been here, the need to write was me, instead of the other way around, I think I have mastered it.....lol...either that or I am just trying to find an excuse for my lack of words of late great write brad, really enjoyed the read |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
thank you |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Powerful images you invoke...great job! Eric |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) This too reminded me of Dante's Inferno when he visits Homer, Horace, Ovid and another poet and he ranks himself sixth among them with Virgil, only to later challenge them in rank! (big hugggssssss) They truly are great writers but you too are great because you're true, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Brad, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Brad~ This is as fine a write as I've ever seen on these pages blue~ Applause ! EXCELLENT ! *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed this |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
thank you |
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