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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-11-13 05:49 PM


The Way That I Feel


She doesn't care about
the things I have to say
or the way that I feel.

If I have to I'll send
her on her way and find
me one that will.


JamesLee
November12
2003



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passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-11-13 05:51 PM


you got that right
Enchantress
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2 posted 2003-11-13 05:53 PM


Sounds like a good plan James!
Hugs~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2003-11-13 05:55 PM


Thank you passing shadows...I forgot to write on the bottom that this isn't about me...well it has been many times...but I wrote this for my son after a phone conversation we had the other day...he is having some communication problems with his girlfriend...James
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4 posted 2003-11-15 02:58 PM




(sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, that's just like you, caring about all your loved ones and I know your son will be touched by that conversation and find that girl that truly can feel for him! (big hugggsssssss) You both are special, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light awlays shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Bec
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5 posted 2003-11-15 09:48 PM


Everyone is entitled to find a person who loves them unconditionally, without question and who offers support always. Even though I'm yet to find this person, we all have an "other half". I'm sure your son will find his, or if this girl is his, they'll sort their problems out.

Bec

"I'm not crazy I'm just a little unwell"~ Matchbox 20

Foxyoasis
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6 posted 2003-11-15 09:57 PM


*HUGS* you deserve someone to love you as much as you love them. Good Write!

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


Magic Solias
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7 posted 2003-11-15 10:26 PM


Good advice to your son.  I hope he'll make the right choices.  We should always think about ourselves in a relationship, too.  We often forget about that.  Thanks for the reminder.

Magic Solias

"we dream to love and love to dream"

EvocativeVerse2
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8 posted 2003-11-16 07:38 AM


Hi James...sound advice to give to your son. Excellent write.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

Bonnie j
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9 posted 2003-11-16 09:13 AM


I hear you. I was going with someone who did not care to hear what I had to say or do things that I enjoyed. As I have learned you are better off without them.
Look at the beautiful poetry you write and maybe if that person was still around you wouldn't write b/c he/she had no interest and said it was unimportant.
Thanks for sharing
See Ya
Bon-Bon

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
10 posted 2003-11-16 10:05 AM


without caring what is there to a relationship...

M

NewEnglandlazurlu
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11 posted 2003-11-16 10:55 AM


James, good morning. I tell my boys this exact sentiment; only you have said it so very eloquently.

A wonderful piece that I shall share with them.

Hugs, Marti

“Prayer makes the heart large enough until it can contain God’s gift of Himself.”
Blessed Mother Teresa

Jes
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12 posted 2003-11-16 11:40 AM


Heyyyyyy thats a great one i can relate to smile.

Though i know my wife still loves me but tahst not enough sometimes, they need to know us also.

As we do them, smile i dont men cut like men and wemen but as husband and wife.

Smile

Go for it

Jes

inkedgoddess
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13 posted 2003-11-16 11:43 AM


yep,
and shes doing it too babe,
shes doing it too.....lolol

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