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Rain Candle
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Rain Candle |
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Kazm Member
since 2003-11-13
Posts 99 |
Rain Candle It's raining. The candle gutters out but I stay: I need to feel it. A little rain doesn't matter. This warm place renders it irrelevant, as street lights leave the candle obsolete and therefore necessary whether it burns on or withers in the rain. Tomorrow is time enough. I'll call you then. |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
I really enjoyed this and hope you post more soon |
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LiL-Jew Junior Member
since 2003-10-28
Posts 30 |
that was very good. i really loved it, keep writing. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions. I hope to see more of your work! Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very enjoyable first post. I look forward to seeing more of your work.. Please check you email for a special greeting. Nancy. ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Nice, Kazm -- first post or hundred first. I'll look for more of you. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Well done first post!! Be looking for more of your writing... Welcome to this place! jwesley |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
welcome to passions  liked the title of this poem |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice first post Welcome To Passions  |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Quite nice..... Hope to see more of you!!!! WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown [This message has been edited by Justbleu (11-13-2003 06:21 PM).] |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
A little rain doesn't matter. This warm place renders it irrelevant, Just wonderful!!! Welcome Kazm~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome! I felt the drizzle, saw the candle flicker, tomorrow will be another gift, another opportunity. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kazm~ WELCOME to Passions~ A worthwhile first read of your work ... sit back and enjoy the multitude of talent in this wonderful circle of poets and friends~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Welcome to Passions Enjoyed your first post Have fun here~ Chris Let your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf. -Tagore |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Seeming contradictions just make this more cohesive... I found myself reading it again and again. *S* Welcome to Passions... I'm looking forward to more of your work! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
   (smiles) Yay! I love the rain and believe we all need some of it to make the world glisten a little more brightly and bring life all around! This is a wonderfully vibrant debut, God Bless You, sweet friend, I love this! Welcome to Passions, sweet Kasm, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your wondrous poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kazm, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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tecoyah Member
since 2003-11-16
Posts 83NY |
just repeating others but....enjoyed this alot |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
Very nice Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Welcome to Passions. You have a nice style. Read very well. See you soon. ThisDiamond |
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