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ben_pelling
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since 2003-02-28
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Isle of Wight UK.

0 posted 2003-11-13 03:32 PM



Will you ever really know?
Will you truly understand?
Will you ever really see?
Come here and take my hand.

I'll tell you, I'll show you,
I'll guide you to my heart,
I'll let you into my soul,
From me you'll never part.

I dream every night when I sleep,
But my dreams are only about you.
You occupy my every thought,
You're in everything I do.

You are my days, you are my nights,
You are my everything.
I'll never, ever let you go,
For you are what completes me.

I can't imagine who I'd be,
Or what I would be like
Without having you here with me
As the center of my life.

You're the stars in my midnight sky,
You're the millions of fish in my sea,
You're the hot, bright sun in my world,
And that's what you mean to me.
This poem is dedicated to Debbie,
the love of my life.
She's the shining star
that shoots across my life.
Debbie, I love you now,
and I will love you always.


[This message has been edited by ben_pelling (11-14-2003 02:31 PM).]

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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-11-13 04:02 PM


This is so romantic and sweet. I loved it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2003-11-13 05:58 PM


this is so sweet
ThunderMage
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since 2002-06-20
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3 posted 2003-11-13 07:10 PM


Reminds me of someone I know.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2003-11-13 07:13 PM


Oh My!  How romantic this is!!
Debbie is a lucky lucky lady!
Hugs~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

smiley
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since 2003-11-13
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5 posted 2003-11-13 07:33 PM


very sweet poem! how great it must feel to be debbie!
Justbleu
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
6 posted 2003-11-13 07:38 PM


Ah very nice.....
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


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