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Open Poetry #29

Living Masterpiece...

Ku'uipo
Junior Member

since 2003-09-25

Posts 42

0 posted 2003-11-13 02:39 PM

I never knew crimson could shine so bright,
Irredescent almost invisible color,
It burns my eyes,
Steady glow,
The ocean becomes a living canvas,
With all the shades of fire and ice,
Dancing upon the water's surface,
Reflecting something no one else can see,
What a mysery,
The scorched sky,
The horizon disappears with the sun,
Hills merge into the mist,
The serenity stalls time,
I am captured in a masterpiece.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2003-11-13 02:42 PM

The ocean becomes a living canvas,
With all the shades of fire and ice,
Dancing upon the water's surface,
Reflecting something no one else can see,
What a mysery,

This is a masterpiece! Loved this verse, with its fine descriptions.

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-11-13 02:45 PM

This is beautifully written

Cold hands means a warm heart

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

3 posted 2003-11-13 02:56 PM

Sounds beautiful. Thank you.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-11-13 05:59 PM

I've seen this before...a nice scene

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