Questions Senryu Trio-ete (An Invitation)

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Open Poetry #29

Questions Senryu Trio-ete (An Invitation)

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2003-11-13 09:07 AM

Would you try to hear
if I asked you to listen         {Gentle Spirit}
to the sounds of love?

Sometimes ears are blocked
because love can at times hurt     {Sunshine}
Should one give their all?

I have heard the sounds
like a whisper in the night       {Enchantress}
Do you not listen?

{A senryu tag started while the forums where down,
please feel free to tag along if you wish...}

It's better than I could have planned..
it's made me who I am...
{Trace Adkins}
[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (11-13-2003 06:48 PM).]

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2003-11-13 09:28 AM

Gentle,
Well done enjoyed the read.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2003-11-13 09:41 AM

Hi Donna!
Hi Karilea!
This was such fun..perhaps now more will add on.
A great way to pass a lonely Wednesday without PiP.
Terrific idea!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2003-11-13 09:47 AM

+*+*+*+*+
Soft breezes carry
The voices of the angels.
Are you listening?
+*+*+*+*+

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2003-11-13 10:07 AM

The sounds of real love
Come from all over the world
Will you help listen?

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

5 posted 2003-11-13 10:27 AM

Silver Bells
Are you listening?
To my love
Know what you're missing

Listen close
Can you hear it
Liked your poem
Ms. Gentle Spirit

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2003-11-13 10:48 AM

Ladies~
These are truly LOVELY~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2003-11-13 01:08 PM

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

8 posted 2003-11-13 10:18 PM

Reverberations
True love is inaudible
Except to the soul

Freedom is the key
Love and trust go together
To truly possess

Jealously cripples
Suspicion breeds lack of trust
Faith nourishes growth

Friends and family
Source of everlasting love
Steadfast and so true

Oh...I could go on and on like that little Duracell bunny, so this was a lot of fun.

Very pretty ladies!

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