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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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File of Choice I’ve opened up a file of choice A picture file with muffled voice A scene, a look, a babbling brook A cozy in a dreamy nook It is a file I stored in wile It is an ecstasy of guile It is a phantoms living space Set in harmony of grace It’s here I make my dreams come true My butterflies of colored hew The emerald waters of an Isle With passion and a loving style Here I mine the gold of seem A faultless place within a dream A shopping mart from end to start And fill my heart with heavens art It is a sway where I would play It is a sun without the gray. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Here I mine the gold of seem A faultless place within a dream A shopping mart from end to start And fill my heart with heavens art Heaven's Art my friend are those as yourself who realize happiness lies within...and not in our expectations of how others should be. This was a breath of fresh air, and as always, a pleasure to read. Thank you Sy....Good morning and wishing you a wonderful day... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Here I mine the gold of seem ============= and that will be me waaay cool line of the day. *S* Your rhymes are my gold mine   just sent you a note Sy-babes    |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
It’s here I make my dreams come true My butterflies of colored hew The emerald waters of an Isle With passion and a loving style Its very hard to pick a fav line out of this poem, it just dances off the page. Wonderful morning write Sey. Hugs. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Sounds like a beautiful place Sy. Heavenly. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
~ and you choose well!   EA |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now Sy...all I can say is thank you for the  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Good morning dear, thank you for the lovely. And may you have the best of days. JM, Randy smiled and I wiled and that's whats in my bank of file. WWRS Gentle, You are gentle indeed. Hugs back scorpio, It is, it is. Earth Angel, And you are my angel of choice. Sunshine, Good morning love. Hugs |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Sy...perfectly flawless as ususal! I've missed you this week...come sit and have tea with me? ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ My votes with JanetMarie on this line - 'Here I mine the gold of seem' There is such a lyrical flow to this piece, the cadence of your rhyme makes the words dance~ You are STILL the BEST read aloud poetic master of the day~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, Thank you love I'll be right there. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Here I mine the gold of seem A faultless place within a dream A shopping mart from end to start And fill my heart with heavens art It is a sway where I would play It is a sun without the gray. Morning Seymour. I've missed you. I hope that you've had a good week? Hugs to you, my friend  Ethel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, And you are still the best flatter. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethel, Your replies are such a pleasure to read. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ 'flattery' my fanny ! It's FACT~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sometimes I don't even know what to say when I read you |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, Whatever you say is pleasing to me. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
do we have a new toy for our computing moments? Live, on camera with Sy? Well, maybe it is just a dream, I do like those... I am afraid to put my cam on my comp. Pip would close from fright!!!!!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Barry, Wonderful reply, fear is the only true restraint I know. LOL |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Sy, There are some givens I find. A certain given is that I can't get on Passions without checking out your latest! One great after another! Thanks for sharing. I could make marvelous comments on your poem, but in essence I would have to highlight every line because one is just as good as the other! Sadelite |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sadelite Your reply will send me to sleep with happy dreams. Thank you. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
It’s here I make my dreams come true I definitely have one of those files... peek in at it every chance I get. *S* Excellent, my friend. *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern, Thank you love. |
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