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Open Poetry #29

Am I Crying?

exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2003-11-12 10:41 PM

the sun is just
setting
i can feel the rays
go down my body
as it slowly
descends.
why aren't
you here with
me to enjoy this
to embrace this
am i crying?
my emotions always
take over
no matter how much my
sensible side screams.
am i crying?
i start the car and
drive away
drive away
that seems so familiar
so familiar
am i crying?

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2003-11-12 11:21 PM

Chelsea~
Such a sad cry I hear in this piece~

'my emotions always
take over
no matter how much my
sensible side screams'

Oh ... my, do I ever know these thoughts~
If the tears come ... I've always thought that maybe they would dilute the sorrow~
Not so sure ... but I cry anyhow~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2003-11-12 11:27 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Chelsea, this made me cry too as so many reflections can truly make me cry and when I can relate to others tears, that is always contagious and brings tears to my eyes too! (sigh) I send many angel hugs your way, sweet friend, you're never alone, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chelsea, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-11-13 03:40 AM

I've been here...and will go back many times

Shana 18
New Member

since 2003-11-08

Posts 2

4 posted 2003-11-13 07:43 AM

What a sad poem. I liked it a lot. It sounds like nothing can stop anyone from crying. Because I think clears your soul. I am new here and hope to post my poems soon.

Shana 18, ohio

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