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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-11-12 10:17 PM

Lead Me Bare

Randomly I think of you,
untitled poems to pause my blue.
I face the time in fantasies
as seasons mask the wake in me.

I set my days on love once known,
on morning tease in warmth that's grown.
Attention spanned to kiss each thought
and wrap around the feel of naught.

That tree's half gone, a gift of old.
Its branches held words treasured gold.
I watch the last leaves spinning 'round
the fall to quiet, silent ground.

Their many shades to cover all.
Their story blended by their call
of yellows, browns and heightened red.
A collage of colors in their stead.

A carpet laid to lead me bare
from teasing thoughts of season's ware.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2003-11-12 10:40 PM

I set my days on love once known,
on morning tease in warmth that's grown.
Attention spanned to kiss each thought
and wrap around the feel of naught

It's so easy to get wrapped up in your thoughts,
they speak to me in such a way, do you have any idea????
Thank you for gifting me with your sweet soul Maureen~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2003-11-12 11:07 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, leaves always make such gorgeous, natural patterns! (kiss on cheek) You make whole new landscapes come alive, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

3 posted 2003-11-12 11:28 PM

Another lovely piece from one of my faves! hugs, Chris

Let your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf. -Tagore

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2003-11-13 12:14 PM

WynterGal~

'That tree's half gone, a gift of old.
Its branches held words treasured gold.
I watch the last leaves spinning 'round
the fall to quiet, silent ground.'

I like the entire piece ... but this shedding spoke to me~
How totally beautiful, my friend~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-11-13 03:27 AM

indeed...beautiful

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

6 posted 2003-11-17 12:14 PM

Indeed the mosaic of colors..muted in their lie becomes a carpet to the bare... but not to the bleak. The bleak is from inside of us and begs the fill or dreass of womthing warmer than the place our heart may be at the time...

well done M...

[This message has been edited by Cpat Hair (11-17-2003 12:15 PM).]

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