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The Gentle Before The Dawning
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The Gentle Before The Dawning |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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The Gentle Before The Dawning ~*Marge Tindal*~ You come to me in soft stir of morning Ignite my day … before the dawning Touch me tenderly with words of adorn whisper me awake … with a sigh Then again … you fold me close while I tell my dreams goodbye~ As I awaken to your kiss I am reminded, love, of this You are the very all of me the truest reason why I live The gentle before the dawning reminding me … that to be loved I need only … to love~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Marge, a most tender write...and such a truth of an ending...for that is all one has to do... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This is the first poem that I have had the pleasure of reading since Passions came back on line. What a love-ly poem! Love begets love! You are both so fortunate!  Love & Light, EarthyOne |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Marge, how I love poems of 'love.' This is charming and made my heart leap. Huggles my friend, Marti |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, And you know everybody loves you.  |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
This is just beautiful. And so is the person that wrote it. Love .. Betty |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
I love this Ms. Marge Tindel. Its beautiful. :-) |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Marge, what a perfect title for this perfectly gentle, touching poem! Hugs, Corinne |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA |
Marge, This is absolutely beautiful... I love it.  ~Kelly~ Life is a gift so live it to the fullest! |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Marge Your words were quite simply breathtaking. Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: What a tender poem! Thanks for sending me the link! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very soft and touching...thanks for the warmth |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Sweetness at its best, dear Marge! Beautifully rendered. Love, Margherita |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
well done |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
You all are so kind~ Thanking you from the heart of my little bottom~ It's just a wonderful day to be a poetess~ To read and be inspired by so many talented poets is my pleasure~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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