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vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2003-11-12 06:53 PM

There was a long pause
Deep within my heart
I still got it
Got it
In my heart
Don't wanna hide anything
Wanna to start over again
Never mind
of the pouring rain
Today is here
to hold my heart
Because I still got this
heart of mine
Will never let me down
Still got it
The music is still playing
And I still got the song
Will be singing tonight
I still got it
Still got it
Tonight
Here I am
Nowhere to hide
Because I still got it
I still got it
Tonight
Here Iam singing
Got it
Still got it

[This message has been edited by vandana (11-12-2003 07:05 PM).]

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2003-11-12 06:58 PM

VanDana~
This is just delightfully done~
So uplifting~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2003-11-12 07:02 PM

You do have it, my dear. Just a note. If you are going to use slang, such as "wanna", you will want to drop the "to" with it. "Wanna", according to what I understand, is an abbreviation of "want to".

I.e., "I wanna go to the store." as opposed to, "I want to go to the store."

Other than that, you most certainly have "got it."

Hugs,

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

3 posted 2003-11-12 08:15 PM

Hi Vandana, a wonderful read. I enjoyed it so much.

huggles, Marti

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2003-11-12 08:18 PM

vandana
When you got it, you got it. Enjoyed

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2003-11-12 11:46 PM

(smiles) Yay! (does happy dance) You'll always have the music in you, so be a walking jukebox always and play the soundtrack of your life while adding new melodies also! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-11-13 03:31 AM

you write like a song

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