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I'm Curious
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I'm Curious |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada 
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tell me what you're thinking what you're feeling i'm curious turn the music down i can't hear you speak up tell me about your life before we met who you are and what do you believe in i'm curious i want to know you what was your childhood like? everything spill yourself on the floor just so i can be the one to clean it up [This message has been edited by exhale (11-10-2003 12:57 AM).] |
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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
Well, this is curious . . . but be careful - - - - - Your tight phrasing emphasizes your insistence, making this rather demanding in tone. Was that your intent? |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Chelsea~ I like this~ The ability to ask and listen is applaudable~ There are times in my life that I wish I had insisted on knowing things about another~ This one touches the reality of me~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
understandable...you can never know too much about the one you care about... Do songs on the radio sing to all the fools in love? |
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