Open Poetry #29 |
Their Touch |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Masterfully the crafted thought of what is left and softly wove.. Beside a fire of glowing coals embers orange in heated drove... This art to wend and weave, to place a hankie within it’s grieve. To sift the sand from in it’s sieve and skillfully bestow a leave. Was through a count of centuries before the candle’s wick did cry, a wanted blend of elegies for those...departed, die. And from the grass of lofted view, the courtyard of one’s grave. A master’s words then read anew... Of verse...once thought a rave. As wisdom winds the tempered vine into poetic skies... A poet reads a master’s line as a tear drop now falls, now dries. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow...love this Barry, not knowing what to say |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, your poetry truly is seeds that scatter in the wind and bring new perennials to the courtyards of various poetic thoughts and symposiums! (smiles) I love this, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
nice |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Masterfully the crafted thought of what is left and softly wove.. Beside a fire of glowing coals embers orange in heated drove... This was incredibly beautiful..loaded with warm images to sooth the heart and mind.... what a kind person you are. Thank you for sharing. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Magnus~ Smile this day ... this is sheer beauty~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
As wisdom winds the tempered vine into poetic skies... A poet reads a master’s line as a tear drop now falls, now dries. Oh my goodness, Barry..this is so beautiful!! I love it!! Hugs Ethel |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
It's always a treat to read your words... even if envy inevitably rears its head. *G* |
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Jes Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422Denmark |
Liked it Smile Jes |
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