Open Poetry #29 |
Oleander |
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since 2003-01-23
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Oleander It grew here from a wayward seed. I let it, for the easy flowers it might give, and it thanked me by poisoning the ground until grass wouldn’t grow in its shadow. I cut it but it grew again, took more, turned this corner of the garden to a thicket that I couldn’t enter. Now I cut again, this time to end it. Pulpy branches bleed white venom, deadly sap that sticks and dries: I could die by licking my own hand. No way for a man to depart, licking himself. And Oleander -- it kills the heart you know, makes it forget why it beats, give up on living. Some day if I’m diligent, kill every shoot and gouge out every root I will be rid of it. Perhaps it’s just a hope now, but some day when sun and rain have washed the soil clean, I’ll plant a rose. |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ed...I remember how my mother warned me not to touch the oleander in our yard...This can be read on many levels. Well done, as always! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write Ed. Very much enjoyed. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I'm sure you've seen the areas further north, where the counties and towns plant them in the divider lanes - I once wondered if a person had an accident and were to lay bleeding among the bushes...that the sap of the broken oleander wouldn't do him in, anyway... But they do bloom such deviously beautiful flowers... |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Ed, this is a wonderful write. You had me from the beginning and I couldn't let go. Call me ignorant (you wouldn't be the first) LOL, but I didn't know anything about Oleander. Although after reading this, I do believe I know some folks who should have been named Oleander. Ooops, did I just write that? Just wonderful, Ed! Patricia |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ah the danger of beauty ...and even roses have thorns |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oleander truly is the devil with a white veil, just like jimson weed is pretty on the outside but is deceptional beauty! (sad sigh) This is powerful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ed, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Ed, I agree with Martie...this could be read on many levels. But, talking about the plant and seeds taking over, have you ever had a wisteria vine that wasn't kept trimmed back? OMG, those vines take over a yard. I love the flowers that grow on the vine, but hate the vine!! A good write, my friend...it had me thinking on many levels...on more subjects than just the wisteria vine that I mentioned!! LOL Hugs Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (11-09-2003 02:19 PM).] |
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since 2003-01-23
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I do too, GG -- and I hope it will be. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Reading only literally, I couldn't help but smile at the thought that I'd once wanted oleanders in my wedding bouquet... turns out they would have been an appropriate foreshadowing. *S* But to read this only on the surface is to do it injustice... I'm now on my 4th read and absorb more every time. This is superb, my friend. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
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(Ruth? you didn't! OLEANDER in your bridal bouquet??? tsk tsk...but? GRIN) Sometimes the deadliest of things are wrapped in the purtiest of packages...very nice work ed. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
excellent Ed, layered and more than meets the ey |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ed~ Oh yes ... I have known this plant ... deviously deceitful in the beauty of the flower~ And this - 'I could die by licking my own hand. No way for a man to depart, licking himself. And Oleander -- it kills the heart you know, makes it forget why it beats, give up on living.' - is just plain brilliant~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
I couldn't agree more with everything that has been said! Well, penned--probably wish it were well pinned (this plant, I mean!) Enjoyed... Sadelite |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Stunning work~ absolutely. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
You will succeed Ed, of that I'm certain...wonderful images... |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A rose would be much better, Ed. believe in what your heart feels... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...I'll go for the rose...James |
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