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Amature2
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0 posted 2003-11-08 10:51 PM



In Darkness

This evening I started out
As a bright full Moon
Shining for you to see



As time progressed
A shroud of clouds came over me



Then little by little
The Sun started to go out on me



My brightness
Turning into an amber glow



And now as the Sun once again
Goes out on me
I will sit in this darkness
Wondering if it will
Come ‘round to meet me again

"Everybody's lost
But they're pretending they're not
Lost"........Morrissey

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1 posted 2003-11-08 11:39 PM


Excellent! thank you for sharing what I missed tonight!
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2 posted 2003-11-09 11:22 AM



Ah, my clouds did not part...
but you gave me the view.
Thank you so much for this lovely, lovely poem!

IrishDreamer
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3 posted 2003-11-09 11:45 AM


Thanks you for the wonderful picture and beatiful words so I didn't have to miss this due to the clouds after all.

~Angie~

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4 posted 2003-11-09 11:53 AM


I saw it!!
I saw it too!
Amazing wasn't it?
Love your pics....thanks for sharing.
~Hugs~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2003-11-09 02:29 PM




(smiles) Oh my gosh, I just love this presentation here, sweet friend, and yes, you will go through this same cycle in reverse and light up again, yay! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, keep the faith, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Charisma
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6 posted 2003-11-09 03:01 PM


Excellent, both your words and the pictures.
enjoyed them very, very much.

Thank you for sharing

Charisma

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