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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-11-08 06:48 PM


Eternal Love


When I die
my soul set free,
scatter my dust
upon the sea.

As a token
if you care,
leave a beautiful rose
floating there.

I will watch
from heaven above.
With Heavenly Father
in eternal love.


JamesLee
November06
2003
Dedicated to my
three sons.
Gabriel
Jeremiah
Daniel

© Copyright 2003 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
Magnus
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1 posted 2003-11-08 06:49 PM


And I think they will...you are obviously
very proud of each of them....

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2003-11-08 06:52 PM


Thank you Magnus...yes I am...they are fabulous...a wonderful blessing from God...James
Margherita
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3 posted 2003-11-08 06:55 PM


Oh, dear James, what a thought! But you are right, death should not be a tabu. It's a transformation and as you say so beautifully ... your bond of love will be eternal.

You gave beautiful names to your sons.

Love, Margherita

Jes
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4 posted 2003-11-08 07:18 PM


I can see the rose that floats its way out on sea...

Death is not a tabu, when we leave a tear because of death, its because of our loss not because people die. So why not smile and say instead we will meet again.

Smile I liked it.

Jes


JamesMichael
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5 posted 2003-11-08 07:44 PM


Thank you Margherita and Jes...I appreciate it...James
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6 posted 2003-11-08 11:46 PM




(sigh) This is beautiful, sweet friend, this made me smile as He is holding His plan of love at the palm of his hand and he vows to stamp it eternal! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

SharaRose
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7 posted 2003-11-08 11:52 PM


Very sweet. Much enjoyed this one!
Love,
Terri~

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8 posted 2003-11-09 12:14 PM


oh James...this is beautiful!
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9 posted 2003-11-09 12:25 PM


JamesMichael~
You sure know how to make this lady tear up~
How softly tender is this~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
       noles1@totcon.com   

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10 posted 2003-11-09 10:49 AM


it's too dang early to cry...sheesh

very beautiful James...

Do songs on the radio sing to all the fools in love?

misao
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11 posted 2003-11-09 07:00 PM


It touched my heart and my soul. I really hope to read more love poems from you.
JamesMichael
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12 posted 2003-11-09 11:36 PM


Thank you Noah, SharaRose, passing shadows, Marge, Kristie and mesao for the nice remarks...James
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