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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

0 posted 2003-09-25 01:32 AM

~*~

She is a woman of contrasts
tiptoeing on the edge
jagged and razor sharp
teetering on a totter
until she tips herself short.

She is a woman of contrasts
in the eyes of the beholder
sensual in her watery curves
cool and wading
her pulse running deep.

She is a woman of contrasts
skirting the trade winds
skimming over paradise
the sea to her refuge
whitewashing the sun.

She is a woman of contrasts
alone in the shadows
stark as the night
fading ballroom gowns
discarded in dreams.

She is a woman of contrasts
betting against all odds
passed and over turned
who laid her heart down
and lost...
~*~

[This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (09-25-2003 03:27 AM).]

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-09-25 01:41 AM

"She is a woman of contrasts
skirting the trade winds
skimming over paradise
the sea to her refuge
whitewashing the sun."

Amazing writing, as usual.

To the library with this one.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2003-09-25 03:26 AM

Thank you lady Kaoru~

So nice of you Ms. Meg~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-09-25 03:53 AM

sad...i like it

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

4 posted 2003-09-25 08:09 AM

She is a woman of contrasts
betting against all odds
passed and over turned
who laid her heart down
and lost...

when we gamble on love... we know there may be no winners at all in the game..

nicely done blues lady...

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2003-09-25 08:22 AM

BluesSerenade

She is a woman of contrasts
alone in the shadows
stark as the night
fading ballroom gowns
discarded in dreams.
My fav enjoyed.

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

6 posted 2003-09-25 09:23 AM

And won.

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suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

7 posted 2003-09-25 01:37 PM

until she tips herself short.

I think she may be selling herself short... for this lady's a winner... she just hasn't found anyone yet who's worth sharing the prize. *S*

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

8 posted 2003-09-25 01:39 PM

But overall...
she is amazing.

Smiling at you...

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

9 posted 2003-09-25 01:42 PM

LOL, and here I thougth this was about me? I am keeping this one for future reference, and its wisdom within.

Bluesie, no one sings the blues as you do girl.

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

10 posted 2003-09-25 01:58 PM

I have to tell you, after reading this awesome write, that a beautiful woman like yourself, has hardly lost yet.

Jason

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

11 posted 2003-09-25 02:07 PM

She is a woman of contrasts
betting against all odds
passed and over turned
who laid her heart down
and lost...

No, sweet Lori, she hasn't lost.......this woman
has just not happened upon the right person
to give
her the love she wants and deserves, yet.

One day she will, though.....one day when she
least expects it. Just wait and see. When someone,
as she has as much love to offer, they are bound to be
found sooner or later.

Heart hugs to you, my friend

Ethel

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

12 posted 2003-09-25 02:10 PM

Lori...You are deep, varied and amazing!

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

13 posted 2003-09-25 07:13 PM

Smiling at Ed's comment.
This was very deep, in the rhythm of the sea.
Always a keeper. TD

LiquidMidnight
Member

since 2003-09-24

Posts 50

14 posted 2003-09-25 07:35 PM

I really like this poem is built up. I knew that something was going to really put a grip on things by the last first. It was definatley an excellent climax with an unsuspected ending.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

15 posted 2003-09-25 08:43 PM

(big hugggsssssss) That woman has far from lost, she has won, for she now realizes that love was the trick hand and she only grows stronger determined to discover what true love really feels like! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, I send many angel hugs your way, God Bless You, this is fantastic, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lori, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

16 posted 2003-09-25 09:42 PM

they call that just plain moody when I am like that..

your words shine, always
hugs
M

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