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ParisGrl
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0 posted 2003-11-07 10:04 PM


I have no idea how to start this or what to say
I only know I never wanted you to go away
I play our conversation over and over in my mind
I lay awake at night staring at the ceiling asking God, "Why"
How did our relationship turn out to be nothing
You were the only person I knew to turn to
I helped you but you wouldn't help me in return
You hurt me but the bridge you did not burn
I just want you to know I still think of you
Although I doubt you think of me, if you ever need a friend you know where to find me
I highly doubt you will read this or that you even care but I want you to know I will always be there

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1 posted 2003-11-07 11:44 PM


Laura~
There's such an ache in this penning~
I truly hope the person you wrote it for gets the chance to see it~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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wandering glider
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aloft
2 posted 2003-11-08 12:01 PM


I guess we speak different languages sometimes.
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3 posted 2003-11-08 12:07 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Laura, this is very heartaching, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I wish for solace to come to your heart and bring you comfort! (sigh) I hope he truly does care, sweet friend, I send heart hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Laura, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Sadelite
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4 posted 2003-11-08 01:38 AM


!Yo comprendo!   The re-play of conversations, of facial expressions, the works...   Don't leave that tape running too long though, as you can miss out on some really good things.   Thank you for your write.                 Sadelite
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5 posted 2003-11-08 03:20 AM


I feel this closely
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