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Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-11-07 08:54 PM

I have been devoured -
tortured by a kiss.

I don't hide the misery crackle of my bones,
twisting like thorned branches in my body.
Ignoring the music that feels so alone,
in the desolate august gale.

In passing, the sidewalks covered in mirrors,
speak to me in foreign dialect.
Words I know I'd soon forget,
as I've not enshrined the memory.

As you've said I've grown,
deeply rooted misconceptions have been made clear,
as if I am aware of the consequences of my own
lost words.. And I regret ever knowing...
that I've moaned the agony in tune, as
I was being double-crossed by twin midnights.

The world grows dark for split seconds this
evening is
absorbing me as our lips part like
opposite winds.

The difference is only this..

I'd prefer being devoured.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2003-11-07 08:57 PM

I seriously love the way you write.....

keeping this one

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

2 posted 2003-11-07 09:55 PM

lifting jaw up of the floor...Oh God..WOW!... just wow.

I seriously love the way you write too, this is my favourite.

it's a keeper.

fate is not just
whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

3 posted 2003-11-07 09:58 PM

Meg, this is brilliant
God yes I do know that feeling
you always leave me with this
passionate weepy fleeting feeling . . .
hard to explain
loved this
Goddd
beautiful
xxoo

wandering glider
Senior Member

since 2001-04-04

Posts 501
aloft

4 posted 2003-11-08 12:35 PM

Yes, I know that desire.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2003-11-08 12:41 PM

(big hugggsssssssss) I hear you, and I'd much ather get it all over with so I don't have to remember everything! (sad sigh) I send angel hugs of comfort your way, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Meghan, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

SuperGlueRyan
Junior Member

since 2003-06-16

Posts 45
Possum Kingdom

6 posted 2003-11-08 12:53 PM

Fantastic!
This is the style that I would like to acheive, if I had more skill that is. I can relate to this sort of desire.
Keep writing! You keep me motivated.

~Ryan

pandonov
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence

7 posted 2003-11-08 01:10 AM

this one is.... awesome and more

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2003-11-08 04:06 AM

excellent!

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

9 posted 2003-11-08 10:44 AM

Meg, we need to come up with a symbol for my complete wonder and love for what you write, because I am simply running out of words.

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

10 posted 2003-11-08 11:38 AM

meg you never cease to amaze me...awesome!

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

11 posted 2003-11-09 02:43 PM

Just had to come back for another read. Sigh...fantabulous.

fate is not just
whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

12 posted 2003-11-09 03:09 PM

I'm with you. Don't take just a little of me either.

Finish me off and spit the bones, please.

Such a solitary walk through your mind that I felt an almost exquisite pain while reading in some places.

This is a keeper m'friend.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

13 posted 2003-11-09 04:32 PM

you never cease to amaze, missing our insane convos hugs

did i ever mention kidneythieves rock..damn

misao
Member

since 2003-11-08

Posts 50

14 posted 2003-11-09 06:57 PM

Wow.....

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

15 posted 2003-11-09 09:40 PM

Yes...'tis a consummation devoutly to be wished....

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______________Ratleader______________

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

16 posted 2003-11-10 08:58 AM

Meghan~
Very unique thought-creativity -
A pleasure to delve into the layers of this one~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
[email protected]

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

17 posted 2003-11-10 09:59 AM

Wow , this was excellent to read ... and I loved this line below especially
"I was being double-crossed by twin midnights."

Hope

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