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Open Poetry #29

When My Soul Breathes (for GR)

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2003-09-25 01:26 AM

Your love flows out as air I breathe,
Without your love, breath,I have none,

Like a woven rug, threads coming apart,undone,
Death of my heart does come,

As cold as winters tears, frozen mist blows from my warm soul, I need your love in my veins to melt my hearts snow,

Once a colorful world, no color does it have, color fades to black and white, cold and dark as winters night,

Heart forms icecrystals, lonliness becomes my friend,One last breath of love, before the night must end,

As I close my eyes, frozen tears fall and my breath flows out of me, until your love comes back tomorrow,
pain,longing filled with sorrow,

Warming my heart once more,then my soul can breathe
once again! Your love is my life!

True poets don't write with the ink of quill or pen, but with the ink of their heart~
[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (09-25-2003 01:33 AM).]

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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1 posted 2003-09-25 03:55 AM

this one aches till the ending verse

nice write

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

2 posted 2003-09-25 04:43 AM

fabulous,,,

Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

3 posted 2003-09-25 09:33 AM

My love the pleasure of giving you the beautiful life that you live is all mine...if i can nurture and enhance your love..then i have acieved all that i need to achieve...if you are happy then i will always be happy too....love..

Goldenrose.xxxxxxxxxxxx

Jack- In- The- Green
Junior Member

since 2003-09-11

Posts 31
The green woodlands.