Open Poetry #29 |
Fast Forward Yesterday |
Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
That slip, tug, float, pull, release, drift, now dive, then recoil to rise of emotions, like a kite in flight even on a November noon, are somewhere within this Walter Mitty mind, while anticipation’s euphoric ease, that sense of Christmas coming sooner than its yearly promise of good will toward men will soon find me smiling at strangers, before teasing toes in surf, and sand, in strangest places only once dreamed to have roamed, once, long ago. Where ruined nations are but now a path’s foothold that one would visit on a foggy morn for these sights yet to behold have always been within, it’s only a matter of stepping there, again, for those footprints set in time were mine, before tomorrow came. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Superbly done KJ, and I do like the closing lines very much....your feet fit the slippers of time well. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) It is partially a matter of steeping there again, and another matter of stepping aside! (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, perhaps Christmas can come sooner this year, and eventually, everyday, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Smiling at you...sort of like... Somewhere in Time...no? Hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
you mean its that time of the year? AGAIN.......... oh how i promise not to be affected?effected? by it all, walter mitty mind....very cool |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Your gifted phrases lift my heart. Such a pleasure to read you. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
it’s only a matter of stepping there, again, for those footprints set in time were mine, before tomorrow came. True, Karilea. We can go anywhere that we want to...."it's only a matter of stepping there, again" I love this, my friends. Hugs Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
made me think, deep |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"for those footprints set in time were mine, before tomorrow came." ugh.....(hand on heart here)....you just have to know I love this one!! |
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