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littlewing
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0 posted 2003-11-06 11:58 PM



What is to be

will


What is present

is


     A
fleeting kiss
from beak to tip
of wing to flight
angelic delight
ascended below
plane yet unknown


To a crashing wave

of brine to sage


Look to the sky
as eagle's dance

Bound in flight

midair embrace
talons clashing

Feathers thrashing
the sighing of scythes


they

f
a
l
l


endless . . .

only
to
part
and
still
be

ONE  

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FROM:  US

© Copyright 2003 Sue Eckam - All Rights Reserved
vlraynes
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1 posted 2003-11-07 12:13 PM



Oh my...

This is absolutely beautiful, as are
the madviking and the witch...smile

What a loving gift from two who are
one to two who are one...

Love and hugs to ALL of you...

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

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2 posted 2003-11-07 12:28 PM


Bound in flight

midair embrace
talons clashing

Feathers thrashing
the sighing of scythes


Smile. Sounds like we like it a little rough, huh?

I love you both. you do know that don't you?

and I'm gonna cry...

This is just the most touching gift, with insight and wisdom and love and POWER.

So I will just add "so mode it be"--a proper ending to a beautiful prayer.

thank you...


Aenimal
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3 posted 2003-11-07 12:35 PM


rough is gooood..um.yeah. nice sue
brian sites
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4 posted 2003-11-07 01:23 AM


smile

this is wonderful you guys

a gift....

I can't even say my usual silly crapola

this means a lot
thank you
BoonxPeddieWose

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5 posted 2003-11-07 01:52 AM


I have no words
icebox
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6 posted 2003-11-07 06:40 PM


Oh god!  Now I have to go home an listen to a little Wagner.

*smile*

Enchantress
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7 posted 2003-11-07 06:45 PM


Fantastic!!!   Absolutely beautiful!

~Group Hugs~  

Martie
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8 posted 2003-11-07 06:54 PM


Wonderful!
SmartChick
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9 posted 2003-11-07 07:20 PM


Beautiful!
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10 posted 2003-11-07 07:22 PM


love is a wonderful gift, thank you for sharing this love....

Lauren~

i carry your heart with me
i am never without it
you are what a moon has always meant sky of sky
the wonder that keeps stars apart-
e.e.cummings

inkedgoddess
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11 posted 2003-11-07 07:27 PM


spread the joy.........its a love fest, lately in here,isnt it?
when do i get my ticket to ride already?
somebody pulease..........enlighten me

eor
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12 posted 2003-11-07 07:34 PM


this is great!

"For those who understand you, no explanation is necessary. For those who don't, none is possible."

wandering glider
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aloft
13 posted 2003-11-08 01:15 AM


tumbling eagles?
not what I expected form the title
enjoyed

Mistletoe Angel
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14 posted 2003-11-08 01:21 AM




(smiles) Amazing how when they slowly fall, the mad viking seems so much tamer and the witch seems so much more graceful! (big hugggssssssss) Love is capable of so much, sweet friend, it truly can shape-shift hearts and fantasies, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

brian sites
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15 posted 2003-11-08 01:28 AM


I agree with Noah...

garysgirl
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16 posted 2003-11-08 01:39 AM


Oh my!! AIN'T LOVE GRAND??
wranx
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17 posted 2003-11-08 12:06 PM


A vignette of eagles mating...

They mate
in mid air from a great height
struggling to stay connected
And in that struggle
use all that they have

Then separate
and gain the sky once more
to continue...


"In looking Northward, I see a light"


Duncan
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18 posted 2003-11-08 12:17 PM


"What is to be

will


What is present

is


     A
fleeting kiss
from beak to tip
of wing to flight
angelic delight
ascended below
plane yet unknown"

When all the connections connect...there is this.  Excellent.  

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