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Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22
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New York

0 posted 2003-11-06 11:45 PM



war descended upon a hopeless nation
unrest and chaos spread like ebola
May I ponder?
For a minute of your time.
Marching through desolate lands
seeing a silent burial
at every corner.
Ten times a minute
As the weary decend upon the brave
Asking, pleading, begging
Looking for their pain
To be resolved in a silent burial
not effortless,
but we stand alone.
leaving them speechless.
hopeless and homeless
and alone
leaving them to honor the dead
In their silent burial.
With nothing left to give.


© Copyright 2003 Kellie M. Cantrell - All Rights Reserved
ambrish
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since 2003-03-27
Posts 257
India
1 posted 2003-11-07 02:52 AM


but we stand alone.
leaving them speechless.
hopeless and homeless
and alone
leaving them to honor the dead
In their silent burial.
       sad but real, make me think.

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2003-11-07 02:47 PM




(big hugggssssssss) It saddens and sickens me so much to see this frequently recurring in society, and in ones own hearts! (sad sigh) Now it is clear the truth is getting out there with over half now regretting or opposing this stupid war and those thousands of civilians never getting their proper burials, it is a huge shame, God Bless You Both for this poignant write, we all love you so much! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Kellie and Ringo, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Larry C
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3 posted 2003-11-07 05:22 PM


Words to ponder...

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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4 posted 2003-11-07 06:54 PM


The darker sides of truth have their beauty...
Given the lift of enlightenment, perhaps they shed their cloak and fly.
Good work you two.
ThisDiamond

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Saluting with misty eyes
5 posted 2003-11-07 11:08 PM


I would like to thank Kellie for a very enjoyable write... It helped get me out of my slump.

ambrish- Thank you. If you are thinking, then we did our job.

Noah-I still very much support the actions that are being taken, however the fact that you enjoyed this means more than any agreement or disagreement could cloud.

Larry- Thank You.

ThisDiamond- It is much appreciated.

We are all equal but we’re individually different
and able to reach the impossible if we try.

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