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Novembering Moon
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Novembering Moon |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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 Novembering Moon~*Marge Tindal*~ ~Novembering moon such swoon of distant light waltzing the ebon on this night cirrus crinolines skirting her feet o’er the sky she makes her retreat stars cascade around her pathway muted light in fashioned display Oh the beauty of this sight lends soft luster to the oncome of night~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Excellent, you do this so well and make it look so easy....One day I will try it..Yes, one day I will... |
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Mystic One Member
since 2003-09-14
Posts 134 |
By the light of the silvery moon i shall serenade my love to her. Very nicely written Lady Poetess |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
You are Pip's Moon Goddess, you know that?!  You know I love your moon poetry...  |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Nicely said and arranged.... :-) |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: I was just admiring that gorgeous moon and then came in and read your beautiful poem! Perfect! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I love how you have spun your moon magic...  Earthy One |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Wow..from word choice to word positioning, you've drawn a wondrous picture. What is the phrase, "I wish I'd written that?" It's a pleasure to read you. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love this...like all the others...keepers in the heart |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
This was so beautiful.... but trust me guys.... it is not EASY.... incredible amount of tweeking and editing to get one on these right.... I hope you don't mind... You inspired me tonight, Marge. I had to try one of my own..... for the eclipse tomorrow night.  Sherry |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Folks~ I appreciate each and every read and reply~ I so adore the effect of the moon that I find such easy inspiration with her rising~ Magnus~ TODAY is a good day !!  MysticOne~ Thank you soooo much~ SEA~ Well ... if you say so sweetie~ Ice~ Thank you for letting me know you enjoyed it~ BettyLou~ I swannee ... we both just adore that waltzing moon together~ Thank you~ SweetEarthyOne~ Now just your comment has inspired me once again~ Ken~ What a nice thing to say ... thank you` DixieDoodleGal~ YOU are special, my friend~  Thank you for being YOU~ Sherry~ Oh my, you inspire BEAUTIFULLY~ EVERYONE should read your 'Luna Blush' ... it's incredibly gorgeous~ Hope everyone will be tuned in to the night sky as we watch the eclipse together~ There's LOTS of inspire there~ Thank you ALL~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
I am having a bit o'the crow for my wee breakie today... The eclipse is on Saturday.... I got it wrong....{buries head in arm} but your poem was soooo inspiring... I had to write it now.... Sherry |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
the moon was beautfifully perfected this morning, and hopefully, we will all get to see the lunar this evening....many many good wishes sent your way and thank you for the beauty in your poetry to image us.... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Did you know that when I look at the moon, I now think Marge? *S* You pay it such lovely homage. *S* |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
October and November moons are beautiful. I always love your imagery. have missed reading your work. I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Wonderful images here Marge. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wonderful, dear Marge ... I have been gazing at the moon tonight and I have been captured totally by its beauty. Love, Margherita  |
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