Open Poetry #29 |
For A Very Special Friend (You Know Who You Are) |
KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Guess who called in sick today Once again, forgot his importance. Forgot to help the others... I'm feeling selfish for feeling Good. Guess who called in sick again For the third month in a row, Left souls without his fire and flame Dancing in their eyes. Guess who called in sick this year And who was left to find a way Without the missing link inside... No flame to light the fire No waves to lick the sand No wind to dance in the leaves. Guess who called in sick once more And left this soul cold and tired... Call it God, Goddess, or Jesus Christ.... Inspiration called in sick today. I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I loved this poem. Especially the words at the end. Awesome write. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, I love the cliffhanger all throughout this until the cute and uplifting ending, sweet friend, Passions truly is a disease, but the most beautiful disease ever I am proud to be diagnosed with and I know with all my heart your friend will forever cherish this and be proud to be your friend forever as every one of us here has you as a friend in our hearts! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Wonderful! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Very sad, yet beautifully said, Koko. Hugs, ~Vicky When the power of love overcomes the |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
smiles, liked this a lot, but I betcha if you look really hard, she's, he's or someone is there....I don't believe what they say, when they utter, "The lights are on but nobody's home" Good good write and images. Thank you |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
as far as the hunt for best friends go i've trod the path and walked the road but i know at last my journey's through i want no more i found you love you babe! |
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