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Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

0 posted 2003-11-06 12:44 PM

Old faint wind
blow the crying
far,far away
dry the tears
I said I never shed
faithful breeze
bring again to memory
love songs
I danced to
under lunar light
on that cool October night
old wind
take my ship
to dream
until dream forces it
to return.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

1 posted 2003-11-06 12:46 PM

OH! 2 in one day!! What a treat!! (I may never get any work done!)

It is so cool to have you posting again!

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

2 posted 2003-11-06 12:46 PM

Okay Brad...that did it. No one should be able to write that well! (Wink!) This is an exquisite piece. Bravo!

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-11-06 12:48 PM

Gosh! I was off to lunch, hit refresh and just like magic...
another beauty of yours appeared!
Amazing!
Hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-11-06 12:51 PM

old tired wind...but always faithful

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

5 posted 2003-11-06 01:52 PM

thank you

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

6 posted 2003-11-06 02:59 PM

God yes, another lullaby
beautiful Brad
xxoo

Edder
Senior Member

since 2003-04-02

Posts 671

7 posted 2003-11-06 03:09 PM

Well done, indeed. It's good to see you back.

[This message has been edited by Edder (11-06-2003 03:12 PM).]

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

8 posted 2003-11-06 03:15 PM

Brad, do believe this is the best of yours
I've ever read. This part is so beautiful....

Old faint wind
blow the crying
far,far away
dry the tears
I said I never shed
faithful breeze
bring again to memory
love songs
I danced to

Very good writing, Brad.

Hugs

Ethel

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

9 posted 2003-11-10 09:30 AM

thank you

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