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bathed in love |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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....soft echoes of the ocean and gentle pattering of rain a symphony to her heart played softly upon this night..... his eyes held her as so often she had dreamt them to his touch, subdued want the kind of tenderness to melt a woman’s soul there, bathing her in caresses..... the warmth of the water was no match for his skin, for the way his arms felt wrapped round her..... nothing existed beyond the blending ofhearts..... candle’s light danced as if overjoyed for their love.... the bubbles held in champagne flute mimicked those in her heart as she leaned back further into him and whispered, “ready for bed?” ~SEA~  |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
~~sigh~~ You write such romatic thoughts... and the picture tells all try this one .... fits your theme.  Sherry  |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
SEA, You must have been truly inspired to write this... and I mean inspired in the good way. Enjoyed! "If this grand panorama before me is what you call God...then God is not dead." |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow....!!! Eric |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very nicely done Susan.. In your own unique style...love it! Hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It's so lovely to cast my eyes upon our SEA again.... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SEA A lovely write, enjoyd. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hi Susan, this is wonderful. Sandra |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
sue- nice treat to read this morning. i think you might have fogged my comp screen up  excellent writingdear..so good to read you as usual. take care. love ya amy "love is like a butterfly-- |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"the warmth of the water was no match for his skin" perfect! "if you won't let me fall for you |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
this is so soft and sensual.....lovely Sea~...hugssss lady Lauren~ i carry your heart with me |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
aw....oh my...this is touching |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Ahhhhhhh, the beauty of it all~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is precious, sweet friend, may true loves bliss always fill your heart and all young hearts who dream of this fairytale coming true in their youth and innocence! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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