Open Poetry #29 |
Futility |
Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
It was warm and rained today... your Monday weather, now mine so I didn’t hurry inside. I can’t shake you. Would it surprise you to know that I tried? I tried futility once, too that didn’t work out either. . "I’m here without you baby but your still on my lonely mind I think about you baby and I dream about you all the time" 3 Doors Down [This message has been edited by Duncan (11-05-2003 10:23 PM).] |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"I can’t shake you. I can sure understand this |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
and your signature, is the song that plays in my head almost constantly.... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
your Monday weather, now mine so I didn’t hurry inside. =========================== ing at you .... anyone ever tell ya futility looks good on your pen? less is more when a porch puppy is wearing his heart on his sleeve. Words break into splinters on the pages I write |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Great write! Eric |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Love this Dunc! May we have more please? Hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Excellent. More. Soon. Please? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Duncan Liked the symbols, enjoyed. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh Duncan, you are in that space..as I am all the time. I too love that song, and believe it about says it all. Sandra |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Were you walking Chip? Do you know what a beautiful person you are? Thank you for being. "if you won't let me fall for you |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Mmm I love this. Your Monday weather, now mine. That just fuels my immagination. Great line. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
well... Dunc, brevity and the somewhat open ended way of this, suits you well... and as for me... I enjoyed bud... and always glad to see you write.. |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This was great, but then again so all all of your writes. Crystal |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
Would love to shake the somethin' out of some someones too...but, like you said, it's futile... love this Do songs on the radio sing to all the fools in love? |
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