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Girl with a Watering Can
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Girl with a Watering Can |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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As I join Renoir, mesmerized Shades seem to sort themselves Some swirl into each other with Wonder and resolve, no limitations Exploding undefined greens of stillness Puffing forth like a delicate feather In tune as if timing were a baby grand piano, A natural theatrical unison, spiritual enigma Velveteen dress adorned in white opulent lace The artist has thoughtfully whittled a lake Speaking friendly tones of child She is precious, her beauty magnifies Thoughts of genuine fondness, wishes yet to explore Enchanting excitement for horizon's woman There is not room for meanness and annoyance here Only the face of an seraph, valor and immensity Finger marks this canvass, energy of discovery, Inventive beauty, generous with handsome speech Interception defines the prettiness, softness, and fragrance elite Golden locks rhyme overtones and emphasis of peace A rare home, regretting no loss within a garden's reach Archiving meaning, valuable presence, radiance of the day Unfolding forth as she grows, within her dreams Servitude with food supply and happy golden wings Swimming in poetry, what peace this trust does bring True essence to the core of reality Many impressions crown my mind, Voice of thoughts, pouring forth Stunning upon impact, warm summer breeze, weightlessness Lulled to a place where soil is airy and illuminated. Moving any infinite traveler with pale rose happy cheeks Swaying companionship of hues, One could not be without the other, Enhancing certitude on the pallid of growth The watering can of truth I found myself completely lost in all these treasures rolling Loyalty to home Mon Vieux Chamal |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
"Velveteen dress adorned in white opulent lace The artist has thoughtfully whittled a lake Speaking friendly tones of child She is precious, her beauty magnifies Thoughts of genuine fondness, wishes yet to explore Enchanting excitement for horizon's woman There is not room for meanness and annoyance here Only the face of an seraph, valor and immensity Finger marks this canvass, energy of discovery, Inventive beauty, generous with handsome speech Interception defines the prettiness, softness, and fragrance elite Golden locks rhyme overtones and emphasis of peace A rare home, regretting no loss within a garden's reach Archiving meaning, valuable presence, radiance of the day Unfolding forth as she grows, within her dreams " This is...amazing. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"In tune as if timing were a baby grand piano, A natural theatrical unison, spiritual enigma Velveteen dress adorned in white opulent lace The artist has thoughtfully whittled a lake Speaking friendly tones of child She is precious, her beauty magnifies Thoughts of genuine fondness, wishes yet to explore Enchanting excitement for horizon's woman" My favourite stanza?....Above. My favourite piece by you?...This one, so far.  I LOVE IT!!! Hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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