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SEA
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with you

0 posted 2003-11-04 06:09 PM





Take me to bed tonight
love me
for all the wrong reasons
just love me right

whisper words
I know aren’t true
come a little closer baby
I’ve got some lies for you too

you can keep your eyes closed
I’ll believe it’s me you’re thinking of
call it what you want
tonight, I need to call it love

just don’t let go of me
in this heated moment, of pretend
touch me with the facade
that this night will never end

and in the sunrise of regret
I’ll smile, as I wave goodbye
fool myself over coffee
that I don’t feel enough to cry......


~SEA~



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1 posted 2003-11-04 06:16 PM


SEA~
Felt the heat of the need ... understanding this one all too well~

Beautiful gal~  Just beautiful~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
     noles1@totcon.com     

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2 posted 2003-11-04 06:25 PM


Feeling this more than can say, to be held for any reason is great need for me, would not mind the cry after.
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3 posted 2003-11-04 06:34 PM


Oh gawd Sue...this aches!!
Beautifully written.
Heart Hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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4 posted 2003-11-04 06:38 PM


is does ache....in places I forget existed....hugssss and more hugssss
Lauren~

i carry your heart with me
i am never without it
you are what a moon has always meant sky of sky
the wonder that keeps stars apart-
e.e.cummings

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5 posted 2003-11-04 06:42 PM


enjoyed
JamesMichael
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6 posted 2003-11-04 06:46 PM


This is touching me...I like the action in it....James
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7 posted 2003-11-04 09:05 PM


girl...

you know this affected me, damn i felt
this one! the way you write never ceases
to amaze me--such emotion!

love ya,
Amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

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8 posted 2003-11-05 12:09 PM


Wow!  Two in a row.  Keep em coming, I enjoyed this one I think more than the last.

"The secret of life is enjoying the passage of time"  ~James taylor~

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9 posted 2003-11-05 01:20 AM


Sea?  This was from an achey breaky heart kinda place, but oh so very good!
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10 posted 2003-11-05 03:52 AM


oh God you wrote me well
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11 posted 2003-11-05 04:15 AM




(big hugggsssssssss) I send many angel hugs your way, sweet friend, this sounds so numb and I hope your heart is now only numb with comfort! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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12 posted 2003-11-05 08:08 AM


"and in the sunrise of regret
I’ll smile, as I wave goodbye
fool myself over coffee
that I don’t feel enough to cry......"

How 'bout I just nod and say, yep...

"I’m here without you baby but your still on my lonely mind
I think about you baby and I dream about you all the time"

3 Doors Down

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13 posted 2003-11-05 09:11 AM


You keep writing these love songs, Susan...
they fit you very well.


[This message has been edited by Sunshine (11-05-2003 09:18 AM).]

Margherita
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14 posted 2003-11-05 12:12 PM


Great write!
Psychologically very revealing.
Love, Margherita

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15 posted 2003-11-05 12:34 PM


Wow excellently expressed ,
Sea it was though you had written about me
Hope

nakdthoughts
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16 posted 2003-11-05 12:41 PM


and in the sunrise of regret
I’ll smile, as I wave goodbye
fool myself over coffee
that I don’t feel enough to cry......

my favorite lines too Sea

*s
M

( nice to read you again)

KristieSue
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17 posted 2003-11-05 12:44 PM


definitely something we've all felt...very honest.

Ya know what they say.  Curiosity salted the snail.

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