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don't feel enough.... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 Take me to bed tonight love me for all the wrong reasons just love me right whisper words I know aren’t true come a little closer baby I’ve got some lies for you too you can keep your eyes closed I’ll believe it’s me you’re thinking of call it what you want tonight, I need to call it love just don’t let go of me in this heated moment, of pretend touch me with the facade that this night will never end and in the sunrise of regret I’ll smile, as I wave goodbye fool myself over coffee that I don’t feel enough to cry...... ~SEA~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Felt the heat of the need ... understanding this one all too well~ Beautiful gal~ Just beautiful~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Lotus Breeze Member
since 2003-09-06
Posts 112 |
Feeling this more than can say, to be held for any reason is great need for me, would not mind the cry after. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh gawd Sue...this aches!! Beautifully written. Heart Hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
is does ache....in places I forget existed....hugssss and more hugssss Lauren~ i carry your heart with me |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This is touching me...I like the action in it....James |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
girl... you know this affected me, damn i felt this one! the way you write never ceases to amaze me--such emotion! love ya, Amy "love is like a butterfly-- |
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allamericanjoe Member
since 2003-10-02
Posts 116Iredell county, NC |
Wow! Two in a row. Keep em coming, I enjoyed this one I think more than the last. "The secret of life is enjoying the passage of time" ~James taylor~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Sea? This was from an achey breaky heart kinda place, but oh so very good! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh God  you wrote me well |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssssss) I send many angel hugs your way, sweet friend, this sounds so numb and I hope your heart is now only numb with comfort! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"and in the sunrise of regret I’ll smile, as I wave goodbye fool myself over coffee that I don’t feel enough to cry......" How 'bout I just nod and say, yep...  "I’m here without you baby but your still on my lonely mind |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You keep writing these love songs, Susan... they fit you very well. [This message has been edited by Sunshine (11-05-2003 09:18 AM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Great write! Psychologically very revealing. Love, Margherita |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Wow excellently expressed , Sea it was though you had written about me Hope |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
and in the sunrise of regret I’ll smile, as I wave goodbye fool myself over coffee that I don’t feel enough to cry...... my favorite lines too Sea *s M ( nice to read you again) |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
definitely something we've all felt...very honest. Ya know what they say. Curiosity salted the snail. |
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