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Life and Dancing The Web
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Life and Dancing The Web |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada 
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 ~* Life And Dancing The Web *~  Misted morn gingerly pulls up Her shade in witness Of towering spruce and cedars Planted where every single blade Of deep grass now bends, In a crystal-beaded nightdress. Silvered leaves bejeweled in Sparkling webs of silk Glitter in the morning light, Inviting long lingering Legs of death who wait Anticipating their next dance. Gently one single diaphanous thread Lightly strummed drips a note, A certain life-altering melody Pattering awake the unsuspecting Who sleep soundly, so unaware That today will be life changing. How like insects we’ve become By comparison, That only a single note of kindness Strummed from the velvet chords Of sheer pleasure or deceit Will lead us to dance the web. [This message has been edited by Mysteria (11-04-2003 11:07 PM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Spectacular! Nature and wisdom combined. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Sharon, I know spiders scare so many but I love spiders as they are beautiful artists and whenever my sisters see a spider and scream and want me to kill it, I just put it in a jar and put it on a tree outside! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Breautiful! And the pic?! Spectacular! Very nicely done poetess! Hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Thank you ladies, and Noah - you are too cute! This was a poem comparing how we can believe everything we see and hear on the Internet, and I just thought it much like a spider's web - see? |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Applauding here! at this splendid poetry! Girl, you are a mentor to me, with your vivid images and wonderfully rendered phrases. Dear poetess, please keep writing and writing THis is magnificent! Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sharon, Pics and words a delight. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Ah yes...oh what tangled webs we weave when we first practice to deceive...a very good poem and message for everyone.  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
very nice |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sharon, this is a beautiful poem and picture, with a very needed message put forth!! People like me who have only gotten on the internet a couple of years ago, could be taken advantage of very easily....especially ones who are naive and trusting. Thanks for this, Sharon.  Hugs  Ethel |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I am humbled by your responses, thank you. A lot of deceit, hurt, broken hearts, and money are taken from innocent people every day on this square box. We are real people behind these screens, some with wonderful hearts, others with very cold ones, and no conscience. I hope everyone take the time to discover what is real from that which is virtual and fantasy. Thanks to all of you for reading this, it was an important little ditty to me.[This message has been edited by Mysteria (11-04-2003 08:21 PM).] |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sharon...Am amazing photo, and important message...Thanks for this! |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Hi Sharon ... the picture is breathtaking and the message of wisdom is one we all need to learn and remember. Love ya my friend, Marti |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Wonderful words of wisdom Sharon , yes day after day , people fall victim and become cyber prey Hope |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Martie, Marti, and Hope - Three of the wonderful hearts I mentioned - thank you so much! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Sharon, this is a double masterpiece! I am also very fascinated by those incredible artworks spiders web. Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Margherita, I hope all is well there, and thank you (actually I "borrowed" the spider web from Nan) cute isn't it? |
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