Open Poetry #29 |
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It's Like This |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
It's like this. You haunt the space that lies between us. As if the distance holds a memory of being filled by only you. The air allows your scent to linger in your absence. I breathe only in the wake you leave behind. It's like this. Until we touch again. And then...it's like something even more. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"As if the distance holds a memory of being filled by only you." oh yes, I can sooooo relate to this.... ![]() |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my!! How exquisitely beautiful! I know this feeling....yes. Hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ericc~ Fragrantly beautiful~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ding Ding Ding... another winner, Eric. Another ![]() |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggsssssss) Love is truly something that continues to grow and is an ever-growing crescendo, sweet friend, this is powerful, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
You haunt the space that lies between us. As if the distance holds a memory of being filled by only you'''' ~Sigh~ what a haunting expression....lovely Lauren~ i carry your heart with me |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
The scent of you, dear Eric, precious and unique, reaches out through your awesome words and I inhale your essence as if distance did not exist.... I love you. Margherita ![]() |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Oh, wow. Echoes of love here. I like this one-very much. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed ![]() |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Eric: so so true I breathe only in the wake you leave behind. My God . . just beautiful xxoo |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
It's like this. Until we touch again. And then...it's like something even more. Oh, Eric, you wrote it exactly.... |
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