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Ericc
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0 posted 2003-11-04 10:06 AM





It's like this.

You haunt the space that
lies between us.

As if the distance holds a
memory of being filled by
only you.

The air allows your scent to
linger in your absence.

I breathe only in the wake
you leave behind.

It's like this.

Until we touch
again.

And then...it's like something
even more.

© Copyright 2003 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
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with you
1 posted 2003-11-04 10:08 AM


"As if the distance holds a
memory of being filled by
only you."



oh yes, I can sooooo relate to this....

Enchantress
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2 posted 2003-11-04 10:28 AM


Oh my!!  How exquisitely beautiful!
I know this feeling....yes.
Hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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3 posted 2003-11-04 11:40 AM


Ericc~
Fragrantly beautiful~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
     noles1@totcon.com     

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4 posted 2003-11-04 03:27 PM


Ding Ding Ding...
another winner, Eric.

Another , too.

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5 posted 2003-11-04 04:13 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Love is truly something that continues to grow and is an ever-growing crescendo, sweet friend, this is powerful, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2003-11-04 06:04 PM


Very nice...James
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7 posted 2003-11-04 06:07 PM


You haunt the space that
lies between us.

As if the distance holds a
memory of being filled by
only you''''
~Sigh~ what a haunting expression....lovely

Lauren~

i carry your heart with me
i am never without it
you are what a moon has always meant sky of sky
the wonder that keeps stars apart-
e.e.cummings

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8 posted 2003-11-05 04:21 AM


awesome!
Margherita
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9 posted 2003-11-05 09:25 AM


The scent of you, dear Eric,
precious and unique,
reaches out through
your awesome words
and I inhale your essence
as if distance did not exist....

I love you. Margherita

Pilgrimage
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10 posted 2003-11-05 12:18 PM


Oh, wow.  Echoes of love here. I like this one-very much.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

vandana
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11 posted 2003-11-05 06:54 PM


enjoyed
littlewing
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12 posted 2003-11-05 07:21 PM


Eric:

so so true

I breathe only in the wake
you leave behind.

My God . .  just beautiful
xxoo

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13 posted 2003-11-05 07:31 PM


It's like this.

Until we touch
again.

And then...it's like something
even more.


Oh, Eric, you wrote it exactly....


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