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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-11-04 09:06 AM

Today I Hurt

Weighted shoulders ache
wishing a gentle touch could ease
the knots that twist my dreams
into figure eights and my body into a silence
of sighs and grayness.

Pressure points scream out
what words cannot say
in a skin needing shedding
awaiting to slip into
another day after...

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2003-11-04 09:36 AM

Maureen,
Maybe a

will help.

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

2 posted 2003-11-04 09:43 AM

Truly heart-felt.

Eric

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2003-11-04 09:47 AM

"in a skin needing shedding"

feelin this one

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2003-11-04 06:08 PM

Nice writing...made me think of a some feelings I felt while watching a Korean movie called "The Isle." James

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

5 posted 2003-11-04 06:45 PM

enjoyed

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-11-05 03:57 AM

you and me both, lady-friend

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2003-11-05 11:52 AM

thank you...I appreciate your responses
M

jellybeans
Member Elite

since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

8 posted 2003-11-05 02:48 PM

wow do I know this.....if writing helps this ache, well then know that you wrote it perfectly.....

ranidae_poet
Member

since 2003-11-05

Posts 66
Texas,USA

9 posted 2003-11-05 02:56 PM

some of the best poetry is written from sorrow and pain. beautiful in all its agony.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

10 posted 2003-11-05 03:12 PM

I'm squeezing you very warmly, saying, hush now everythings gonna be all right...cause you've got so many friends here who care and love you...weep not tears of sadness, but feel the warmth surround your life, from us to you.

Hugs and wishes sent to you for a lovely day

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