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Open Poetry #29

Season, a Sijo

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2003-11-04 07:10 AM

Has the tree sap grown too thick with the chilling of mid Autumn,
The bright colors fade to brown then twirling to rest on the ground,
I gather up brown bags full of once greens just a season past.

Gloom

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2003-11-04 07:42 AM

and when we gather those greens, perhaps by looking at ourselves we can find what we lost...and accomplish from that.

A good good morning to you

ambrish
Member

since 2003-03-27

Posts 257
India

2 posted 2003-11-04 07:59 AM

saying lot in few words

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

3 posted 2003-11-04 11:04 AM

I remember, in school, gathering leaves of different colors to iron between wax paper..

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

4 posted 2003-11-04 11:23 AM

I enjoyed this. I seldom see sijos.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Lotus Breeze
Member

since 2003-09-06

Posts 112

5 posted 2003-11-04 06:17 PM

I like very much, show soft side

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