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dingusjr
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0 posted 2003-11-04 04:04 AM


At night,
Stars and moonlight,
The fragrance of blossoms,
And the softness of a woman,
Are one.

Her eyes
Flicker slightly,
The sweet delicacy
Of softly whispered words, a kiss,
Lingers.

The night,
Cold and lonely.
To someone far from home,
The softness of a woman comes,
In dreams.

[This message has been edited by dingusjr (11-04-2003 04:04 AM).]

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ambrish
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since 2003-03-27
Posts 257
India
1 posted 2003-11-04 07:52 AM


The night,
Cold and lonely.
To someone far from home,
The softness of a woman comes,
In dreams.
      imaginative, artistic,just like dreams.

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since 1999-07-29
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2 posted 2003-11-04 08:35 AM


The sweet delicacy
Of softly whispered words, a kiss,
Lingers.

Ethereal should be elusive... but you've managed to capture it... Beautiful work!

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2003-11-04 08:42 AM


dingusjr
To the setter of the scene belongs the preen.

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