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Star So Bright |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light 
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+*+*+*+*+ As star streaked skies, I closed my eyes, And made a wish upon it. In mid of night, This stellar sight, Brought joy to my spirit. I saw the sign, That you'll be mine, For now until forever. Each heart is pure, And we'll endure, This bond will never sever. Oh, star so bright, Please shine your light, Upon my love and I. As lark does call, May blessings fall, Down from starry sky. +*+*+*+*+ [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (11-04-2003 02:17 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what a write! very uplifting! |
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ljossberir Member
since 2003-05-04
Posts 81Ny, USA |
Belongs on a hallmark card  pretty and magical.. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Oh Linda this was so sweet! I still wish upon a star... "if you won't let me fall for you |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This is so pretty, and well-constructed too. Are you sure that should be 'he and I' there? It didn't sound right to me, but I'm not a grammarian. As I get older, I discover many things I'm not. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
How very lovely Linda.. and yes it does belong on a Hallmark card! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Mystic One Member
since 2003-09-14
Posts 134 |
How beautiful |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
well done,Linda. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Very hopeful! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
passing shadows ~ I'm glad that my words were able to lift you up! lol  Thanks, Dixie!  Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
ljossberir ~ I appreciate your "Hallmark" of a response!  Earth Angel |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Susan ~ Oh, so do I! ~ and may all our star wishes come true! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Pilgrim ~ Thank you for the kind words and for the helpful mini-critique! I agree! That line didn't sound right! I made a change and it reads more smoothly now ~ but it still may be grammatically incorrect! lol Loving hugs, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Nancy ~ Did you know that Hallmark doesn't accept unsolicited submissions?!? You need an agent to peddle your poetic wares! Thanks for the nice reply! ~ and I hope you are feeling much better and that the health crisis has passed. Loving, healing hugs, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
MO ~ Thank you, dear Mystic One! EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
scorpio ~ Hi-ya, stranger! Good to see you! Thank you for the "well done" reply! Warm hugs, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Krawdad ~ "hopeful" ~ Yes, I am! Love and Light, EA |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Linda, this brought a tear to my eye because I love it when children wish and believe in something and I still wish upon a star to have a hand I can hold someday! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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rambling_words Junior Member
since 2003-10-29
Posts 44London, Ontario, Canada |
This is beautifully done. John |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Noah ~ Oh, that graphic was just perfect! Thanks for your thoughtfulness! It really adds to my post! ~ May your wishes all come true! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
John ~ ~ a "beautiful" reply! Thank you! Linda |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Amen! ~K~ |
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SuperGlueRyan Junior Member
since 2003-06-16
Posts 45Possum Kingdom |
This is fantastic. I understand the feeling of this write so well. I personally wouldn't submit this to hallmark even if they did take unsolicited submissions, I would save it and share it with some whose heart connected to mine. Thank you for sharing such a lovely work! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Linda, this is so beautiful. I love those starry nights...  when they're with the right person, expecially. Hugs Ethel |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Kahlil ~ Thank you, Dear K! ~ May all your nights have the magic of starlight wishes Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
SGR ~ Hi, there! Pleased to make your acquaintance! I appreciate your lovely and thoughtful comments! Warm, welcoming hugs, Earth Angel |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ethel ~ Oh, yes! ~ to starry nights with the right person! ~ May twinkling stars forever sprinkle blessings upon you and Gary... Linda |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What a delightful write... may your wishes ever come true. *S* |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
suthern ~ --and I wish the same for you! Thank you! EA |
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