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Earth Angel
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0 posted 2003-11-04 01:53 AM



+*+*+*+*+
As star streaked skies,
I closed my eyes,
And made a wish upon it.
In mid of night,
This stellar sight,
Brought joy to my spirit.

I saw the sign,
That you'll be mine,
For now until forever.
Each heart is pure,
And we'll endure,
This bond will never sever.

Oh, star so bright,
Please shine your light,
Upon my love and I.
As lark does call,
May blessings fall,
Down from starry sky.
+*+*+*+*+

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (11-04-2003 02:17 PM).]

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-11-04 02:03 AM


what a write! very uplifting!
ljossberir
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2 posted 2003-11-04 02:14 AM


Belongs on a hallmark card
pretty and magical..

Susan Caldwell
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3 posted 2003-11-04 09:44 AM


Oh Linda this was so sweet!  

I still wish upon a star...

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

Pilgrimage
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4 posted 2003-11-04 11:38 AM


This is so pretty, and well-constructed too.  Are you sure that should be 'he and I' there? It didn't sound right to me, but I'm not a grammarian. As I get older, I discover many things I'm not.


Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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5 posted 2003-11-04 11:59 AM


How very lovely Linda..
and yes it does belong on a Hallmark card!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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6 posted 2003-11-04 12:51 PM


How beautiful
scorpio
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7 posted 2003-11-04 02:29 PM


well done,Linda.

believe in what your heart feels...

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8 posted 2003-11-04 02:33 PM


Very hopeful!
Earth Angel
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9 posted 2003-11-04 03:14 PM


passing shadows ~

I'm glad that my words were able to lift you up! lol

Thanks, Dixie!


Linda

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10 posted 2003-11-04 03:16 PM


ljossberir ~

I appreciate your "Hallmark" of a response!


Earth Angel

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11 posted 2003-11-04 03:17 PM


Susan ~

Oh, so do I!

~ and may all our star wishes come true!


Linda

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12 posted 2003-11-04 03:20 PM


Pilgrim ~

Thank you for the kind words and for the helpful mini-critique! I agree! That line didn't sound right! I made a change and it reads more smoothly now ~ but it still may be grammatically incorrect! lol

Loving hugs,
Linda

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13 posted 2003-11-04 03:25 PM


Nancy ~

Did you know that Hallmark doesn't accept unsolicited submissions?!? You need an agent to peddle your poetic wares!

Thanks for the nice reply! ~ and I hope you are feeling much better and that the health crisis has passed.

Loving, healing hugs,
Linda

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14 posted 2003-11-04 03:26 PM


MO ~

Thank you, dear Mystic One!


EA

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15 posted 2003-11-04 03:27 PM


scorpio ~

Hi-ya, stranger! Good to see you! Thank you for the "well done" reply!

Warm hugs,
EA

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16 posted 2003-11-04 03:28 PM


Krawdad ~

"hopeful" ~  Yes, I am!

Love and Light,
EA

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17 posted 2003-11-04 04:27 PM






(smiles) Oh Linda, this brought a tear to my eye because I love it when children wish and believe in something and I still wish upon a star to have a hand I can hold someday! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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18 posted 2003-11-04 04:32 PM


This is beautifully done.

John

Earth Angel
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19 posted 2003-11-04 05:05 PM


Noah ~

Oh, that graphic was just perfect! Thanks for your thoughtfulness! It really adds to my post!

~ May your wishes all come true!


Linda

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20 posted 2003-11-04 05:06 PM


John ~

~ a "beautiful" reply! Thank you!


Linda

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21 posted 2003-11-05 12:23 PM


Amen!  ~K~
SuperGlueRyan
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22 posted 2003-11-05 12:47 PM


This is fantastic. I understand the feeling of this write so well. I personally wouldn't submit this to hallmark even if they did take unsolicited submissions, I would save it and share it with some whose heart connected to mine.
Thank you for sharing such a lovely work!

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23 posted 2003-11-05 01:08 AM


Linda, this is so beautiful. I love those
starry nights...   
when they're with the right person, expecially.  
Hugs  
Ethel

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24 posted 2003-11-05 02:51 AM


Kahlil ~

Thank you, Dear K!

~ May all your nights have the magic of starlight wishes


Linda

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25 posted 2003-11-05 02:53 AM


SGR ~

Hi, there! Pleased to make your acquaintance!

I appreciate your lovely and thoughtful comments!

Warm, welcoming hugs,
Earth Angel

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26 posted 2003-11-05 02:56 AM


Ethel ~

Oh, yes! ~ to starry nights with the right person!

~ May twinkling stars forever sprinkle blessings upon you and Gary...


Linda

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27 posted 2003-11-05 10:00 AM


What a delightful write... may your wishes ever come true. *S*
Earth Angel
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28 posted 2003-11-05 05:37 PM


suthern ~

--and I wish the same for you!

Thank you!


EA

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