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ThunderMage
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0 posted 2003-11-03 08:44 PM


One night long ago, while I walked in the light,
The grip of love held me so tight,
I thought in my heart it might never end,
I wouldn't be one to lose my best friend.

As my childhood sweetheart gave me that kiss,
My cheeks turned red; "Nothing's better than this."
And with a smile and a return of the fire,
I knew I'd gladly walk the wire.

I felt invincible, I couldn't be harmed;
Fear challenged me, but it came unarmed.
I stood tall and noble, truly a hero,
But now that she's gone, my power's reached zero.

But I can't surrender to darkness again,
It's evil and strong, and only causes pain;
A light of those memories shines from within,
Piercing the darkness and helping me win.

I unsheathe my sword and hold up my shield,
Never once understanding the power I wield;
Holding my blade, I've become a sword master.
Evil may move fast, but I'll always be faster!

Darkness is strong, but it lacks light's speed;
Heroes come and go, each riding a trusty steed;
Many heroes have come, though so few live;
For my quest of love, their lives they all give.

But this to shall pass, no more heroes will die!
Face me now evil, just you and I!
I'll never run away, This time I'm prepared;
Never again will I run away scared!

The time has come to conquer all challengers;
As they draw their daggers I unsheathe Excalibur.
I'll not be defeated! I've fought too long;
How could something so right have gone so wrong?

I've fought too hard to lose, too hard to compromise,
This darkness must fall; it's in for a surprise:
Excalibur glows with the power of light,
Bringing divine strength, bringing me might.

This evil will perish by the blade in my hand,
Never again to hurt my adventuring band.
And with but a swipe at just the right time,
I'll finish it off and end my rhyme.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

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1 posted 2003-11-03 10:04 PM


And you did,  very nice,  good story.
the_loner_23
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2 posted 2003-11-03 11:04 PM


yes very nice story.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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