Open Poetry #29 |
I'd have To Say that it's She |
EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
I'd have To Say that it's She 'Tis well-nigh arduous to describe her kiss, She snared my heart at the first pressing of lips, In her eyes 'tis tenderness that exists, Yea towards calenture need oftentimes trips. Mayhap we are more then the sum of our hearts, The conjoining of souls, the melding of wants, And we'll press ever onward by fits and starts, Ignoring life's ruins, uncertainties, and taunts. What is it that makes existence worth living? In answer I'd ever have to say that it's she, Yea life, sweet life, is often unforgiving, But her ardor brings me naught but joyous glee. Seems there are ne'er enough hours in the day, To gift her a kiss or bring her a bouquet. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Mayhap we are more then the sum of our hearts, The conjoining of souls, the melding of wants, And we'll press ever onward by fits and starts, Ignoring life's ruins, uncertainties, and taunts. ~*~ Now THAT'S a great stanza! |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Shakespeare, Another beautiful poem. I Love It. You truly are Shakespeare reincarnated. Hugs my friend. :-) |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
The enire piece is breathtaking! ~hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"Yea life, sweet life, is often unforgiving, But her ardor brings me naught but joyous glee." Very sweet! She is a lucky lady. "if you won't let me fall for you |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ah yes *echoing above comments* |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
simply amazing poetry you have here. I am very picky about any poetry I read with form. I love this. I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Allright...James |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
my goodness, this is so lovely |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wonderful, to have the feeling, and the words. I know a good florist. |
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