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EvocativeVerse2
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0 posted 2003-11-03 03:10 PM


I'd have To Say that it's She

'Tis well-nigh arduous to describe her kiss,
She snared my heart at the first pressing of lips,
In her eyes 'tis tenderness that exists,
Yea towards calenture need oftentimes trips.

Mayhap we are more then the sum of our hearts,
The conjoining of souls, the melding of wants,
And we'll press ever onward by fits and starts,
Ignoring life's ruins, uncertainties, and taunts.

What is it that makes existence worth living?
In answer I'd ever have to say that it's she,
Yea life, sweet life, is often unforgiving,
But her ardor brings me naught but joyous glee.

Seems there are ne'er enough hours in the day,
To gift her a kiss or bring her a bouquet.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

© Copyright 2003 Kevin R. Middleton - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-11-03 03:23 PM


Mayhap we are more then the sum of our hearts,
The conjoining of souls, the melding of wants,
And we'll press ever onward by fits and starts,
Ignoring life's ruins, uncertainties, and taunts.

~*~

Now THAT'S a great stanza!

froggy
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since 2003-06-23
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2 posted 2003-11-03 03:24 PM


Shakespeare,
  Another beautiful poem.
I Love It.
  You truly are Shakespeare reincarnated.
Hugs my friend.

:-)

Enchantress
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3 posted 2003-11-03 03:26 PM


The enire piece is breathtaking!
~hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

Susan Caldwell
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4 posted 2003-11-03 03:28 PM


"Yea life, sweet life, is often unforgiving,
But her ardor brings me naught but joyous glee."

Very sweet!  She is a lucky lady.


"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

passing shadows
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5 posted 2003-11-04 01:56 AM


ah yes *echoing above comments*
Temptress
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6 posted 2003-11-04 02:02 AM


simply amazing poetry you have here.

I am very picky about any poetry I read with form. I love this.

I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU!


JamesMichael
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7 posted 2003-11-04 06:10 PM


Allright...James
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with you
8 posted 2003-11-04 06:16 PM


my goodness, this is so lovely
Martie
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9 posted 2003-11-04 11:19 PM


Wonderful, to have the feeling, and the words.  I know a good florist.
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