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Rick
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0 posted 2003-11-03 07:11 AM



WORDS

I’ve only words to give you and a promise from within
My poetry and whispers and a sorry for each sin
My soul which shares a passion that my heart cannot confine
A scroll of still veiled lullabies and prayers to make you mine

My words are not enough to say the many things I feel
My tears might be the only thing to show the way I deal
For words are lonely without touch to sanction them as truth
As honesty from in the heart, provides the needed proof

Words are lonely without ear to hear or eyes to see
A word is worthless without voice to tame or pen to free
As hearts are empty, beating cold and heavy on the soul
They both need time for sharing and a place to make them whole

© Copyright 2003 Rick Van Weenen - All Rights Reserved
Mary Ann
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since 2003-04-23
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1 posted 2003-11-03 07:21 AM


Beautiful   Enjoyed the lovely read....

God bless,

~MA~  

Rick
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Posts 2903
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2 posted 2003-11-03 07:37 AM


Dear Mary Ann, thank you for your wonderful reply, it was very much appreciated. Be well and take care.

Sincerely
Rick

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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3 posted 2003-11-03 08:57 AM


I’ve only words to give you and a promise from within
My poetry and whispers and a sorry for each sin
My soul which shares a passion that my heart cannot confine
A scroll of still veiled lullabies and prayers to make you mine


Rick, this was enriching, focused and sincere...what a lovely gift she has in you...baske always in the being of the love you two are unfolding.  

My best to you.
Lee J.

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
4 posted 2003-11-03 09:03 AM


Rick
An excellent write, enjoyed.

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
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Florida
5 posted 2003-11-03 09:12 AM


"For words are lonely without touch to sanction them as truth"

Isn't that the truth?

Well done.

Susan

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
6 posted 2003-11-03 12:05 PM


You share the beauty of your soul.
Love, Margherita

angelblueyes
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7 posted 2003-11-03 12:07 PM


This beauty is a wonder to share.You're both lucky to hav someone to share it with.
Crystal

passing shadows
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displaced
8 posted 2003-11-03 12:25 PM


oh dear Rick...I have truly missed your words...your tears...your smile...your heart.

Thank you for this today, and I shall keep it for tomorrow too.


Rick
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since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia
9 posted 2003-11-04 06:00 AM


Dear LeeJ, lovely to hear from you my friend, thank you so much for this wonderful reply, very much heart felt and appreciated.

Seymour, great to have you reply, thank you again my friend.

Susan, great to have you visit here and reply, thank you for that.

Margherita, you share your kindness and heart, thank you for your reply.

Crystal, often words are spoken or written in dream land, thank you so much for your reply, great to have you visit here.

Dear Dixie, sorry for my absence, much happening and not enough time to do everything, always wonderful to see you visit, you are a good friend, take care and again goodluck in love.

To you all, thank you again, all your words are so much appreciated and heart felt.

Sincerely
Rick

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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Melbourne, Australia
10 posted 2003-11-04 03:52 PM


Hello Rick

I have missed reading your beautiful words which always have the ability to touch my heart.  I hope all is well in your life.

"We aspire to -
act with the eyes and heart
of compassion.
We know the happiness
of others in our own happiness....
We know that every word,
every look, every action,
and every smile can bring
happiness to others"

Take care..........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Rick
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since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia
11 posted 2003-11-05 04:30 AM


Dear Sue, thank you for your reply, I have not found much inspiration to write of late, I hope that it returns soon, be sure I will share all with you as all my friends in passions. Wonderful to read you here, take care my friend and be well.

Sincerely
Rick

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