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listen she said to the sea
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listen she said to the sea |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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lord three chords and echoing humming moans through the sustain down the gullet faithful stain of sharps in F the bones remain tinkling the toes again leaving just an echo same "let it all remain" again leaning on the keys. Take a tankard flipping thumb juices pleasing teasing me-- nose in hint of what I live and marigolds line my silt bed wafting narrow circumstance next to the cement. Blush a blanket color me Take me take me take me bleed listening yea glistening-- the conch is split complicity licking at my ear. |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Serenity, this was magnificent.  I've missed you're words, heart, and your touch that you give to each write.  Crystal |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
hear it hear it o HEAR it come dance with me now love you |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Okay I got that one loud and clear! You were listening at a shell while having a beer right?  LOL, beautiful m'friend. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I heard |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Makes me wonder why I am not independently wealthy and live on a tropical island with a cabana boy and an endless supply of pina coladas.... *sigh* Ditto on that love ya. "if you won't let me fall for you |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
[b]lord three chords and echoing humming moans through the sustain down the gullet faithful stain of sharps in F the bones remain tinkling the toes again leaving just an echo same "let it all remain" again[b] ======================= ya had me from the title on..... love the way you rhymed this down the page with your imagery and gift of verbiage. achingly lovely baby.  Words break into splinters on the pages I write |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Gads, I'm not only listening... I'm sitting here in awe. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I'm with Karilea... sitting here..in awe...speechless. Beautiful write... Love ya lady! Hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence |
u are a ftawless writer indeed |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, Beware the shell that stirs the sea For in it a little of thee. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Karen? listen . . . . |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
serenity...not even sure where I went while reading this...but I think I had wings. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"again leaving just an echo same "let it all remain" again leaning on the keys." LOVE this |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
you liquified all the words sister-whitch. cool  What about China? Have you seen the Great Wall? |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Smile. Thanks so much. I really was trying to keep it fluid. In fact, I think I pulled something.  Love you all. I think I'm going to couch now.  g'nite good poet people. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Jeez K, how do you do it? Amazing. M fate is not just |
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