The Reason for the Treason of the Season

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rambling_words
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since 2003-10-29

Posts 44
London, Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2003-11-02 06:08 PM

The well of my emotions is empty
I have reached the bottom
there is no further that I can go
I cry for no apparent reason
then I stare off in the distance to another season
where oceans swim with pearls across a liquid canvas
washing away on a solid wooden platform waiting for a train
destinations are only places of faces
reflecting in the past of our lives
buildings that represent home
when nothing could be further from the truth
my home is inside your heart
the vast mind of a soul bleeding for the unknown
crimson skies dying in a form of treason
I now know the reason
why I cry for the changing season.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2003-11-02 06:14 PM

when you think you've reached the bottom,
hold your breath,
close your eyes,
open your heart and mind,
and dive deeper

thank you, for a pondering write

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2003-11-02 06:49 PM

Wonderful write John...
You are quickly becoming a 'must read'.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-11-03 03:46 AM

sounds like the winter blues

I got 'em too

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2003-11-03 10:00 AM

The well of my emotions is empty
I have reached the bottom
there is no further that I can go
I cry for no apparent reason
then I stare off in the distance to another season
where oceans swim with pearls across a liquid canvas
===================================

my home is inside your heart
the vast mind of a soul bleeding for the unknown
crimson skies dying in a form of treason
I now know the reason
why I cry for the changing season.
==================================

this is written across my heart...
stunning mix of imagery and expression.
You and I write somewhat the same...mixing free verse and rhyme.
Very well done poet sir..I am enjoying getting to know your poetry.

Words break into splinters on the pages I write
If I lost you I don't know what I'd do ...
Burn forever where the flame turns blue

David Gray

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

5 posted 2003-11-03 10:23 AM

This was truly outstanding!

I am going to find others..

Susan

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

kayjay
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since 2002-06-24

Posts 2015
Oregon

6 posted 2003-11-03 10:39 AM

Nicely done. KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

7 posted 2003-11-03 10:48 AM

I feel a kindred spirit in reading this. It's as if you read my thoughts. WOW. I hope you won't mind that I save this. Thank you so much for sharing this. Godspeed in all you do.
Love,
Terri~

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

8 posted 2003-11-03 10:53 AM

rambling.
Good rambling, enjoyed.

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