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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Is I, he who loves thee, who stands before thy door. Wilt thee not by chance know of my heart's desires? For though I stand, my wait wanes, I must again leave. In thy memory of yet another night, another beat from within thy breast, thee wilt know of who I am.. For love of thee carries strong the currents swirling. Please, my love....I ask but that thee lift thy latch, let into thy heart my own. And whence the moon falls into the storms of seas, I shalt stand beyond the grassy knoll, waiting. As the quest does take away, as the words then fall deaf ears....I shall ever love, For sadness frowns the face and damp does weep eyes...until one's falcon flies no more. [This message has been edited by Magnus (11-02-2003 11:38 AM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Barry? please put these together you have a beautiful saga unfolding before my eyes . . . *smile* tissues . . need tissues . . . xxoo |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
methinks the falcon shall rise again in new form A phoenix' soul is within your heart, Barry |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
how could one ever refuse you? |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Funny, how one can write two or three or so poems of a similar topic and it all seems to fall together as a continuing saga. I guess that this could apply here as well, and perhaps the Falcon shall continue to fly... Thanx ladies, you both, for your thoughts. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Who could? Why Dixie, lots and lots.... My two cats look at me early in the morning and it takes them half a day to recover from the shock!!! |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
hehehe Every male should be born with these genes that says things like this to his love. WOW..where did you come from? X, Y Chromosomes...which is it? I can't remember, but I'll rememeber these words!! WOW! love, Terri~  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry Part of your heart comes from a time when romance spoke like this, perhaps you lived another time and recall. Seems like it.  |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Genes or the drinking water? Hmmm...it doesn't matter where it comes from as long as you keeping it coming! I was thinking you should go out and educate the male species on subject of romance. I can see it now...a T.V. show, Dr. Barry! Patricia |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Barry, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I too read this like part of a saga, then again your poetry is always adventurous and takes us on many journies! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, you are one well-trained falconer, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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