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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence 
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face, phase of the face trepidation on raven’s shoulder striped in white where is the yellow fiber tainted with possibilities?… ‘illusion’ is the question; answer is not ‘time’ search declined… |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
maybe there is no answer |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I know I can't be the only one that read this  |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence |
and yet you are, thx for doing it twice  |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
sorry i missed this..been scurrying in the shadows...excellent writing scurries off |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
pandonov, Interesting write, enjoyed the read. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
This one esoteric, not for the casual reader....so like a lot of really good stuff it'll probably tumble....but man do you know how to create an atmosphere! I like this very much. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence |
thx a lot guys, appreciate your comments |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
trepidation on raven’s shoulder striped in white'' wish I had written that thought.....you do poetry justice! Lauren~ i carry your heart with me |
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