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S Arthur Grey
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woven by a poet's loom

0 posted 2003-09-24 01:31 PM



words adrift
seek beaches,
to be counted
among the sands

but many languish
just offshore
and become
a siren's voice




(thanks for the idea, helen)

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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
1 posted 2003-09-24 01:34 PM


yw smooch
1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
2 posted 2003-09-25 12:20 PM


bump

Aenimal
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3 posted 2003-09-25 12:43 PM


fantastic sir sorry i'd missed this
Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
4 posted 2003-09-25 12:51 PM


Beautiful.
Cpat Hair
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5 posted 2003-09-25 08:13 AM


nicely done...

I enjoyed

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2003-09-25 08:16 AM


S Arthur Grey
Yes they do, enjoyed.

S Arthur Grey
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7 posted 2003-09-25 11:57 AM


Thanks for your support, slick, slick, Ae Kaoru, Cpat, Sey.

Busybusybusy, and other stuff too, but I'll be back . . .

s.a.g.

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