Open Poetry #29 |
Life Gazes Upon You |
LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Through the “huacas” fuse such wise keepers Botanical gardens breathe celestial regions Stunning rivulet where visions transform Delving great mystic veils with lapping sounds Of oceans paving our moments…poignant grace, earning day Breathtaking finery sighs redeeming embryonic prose Making portions glow….climbing subterranean dreams I think are there, forever…proving wonders…looking on Of earth’s finest prize review, bending with charismatic mind White distinctive contributions…perceptive venues Not of one point of view, but all of earths’ essence… Gentle kindling fire…where springtime holds close Tokens of yesterday’s destiny, revealing fresh sea green volume Reminding the promise which warms in colors from deep down Shy-soft, lively carved summer whispers carry like bubbles white Mirroring…stretching a soft blue horizon with mortal human hands Splendor, light and life, giving to the masterpieces of known contentment Where you…live, flowing, with admiration and a wreath of bays Most ingenious, is this verse which seeks with royal blood Into the rare vein of mankind….joys which bud With informal juncture…wearing the strongest eyes Holding all my wondering thoughts…most bright Airy fields of man….within such seas profound Rich pearls, pink coral treasures enshrine… Wishing you all sweet looks and star filled hues Good Morning fellow Poets |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ, My favorite lines. "Most ingenious, is this verse which seeks with royal blood Into the rare vein of mankind….joys which bud." Well done, enjoyed. |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
well done |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Lee, each line could stand on its own! Peace, Love & Light, Linda |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
aw Lee, this is just beautiful *wishing you the same* |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Wow, what a wonderful write! Thank you, Lee, and good morning to you. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Wonderful, brilliant.. |
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