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Ringo
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Saluting with misty eyes

0 posted 2003-10-31 02:06 AM



Sitting here thinking of you
What it all means
Friendship first  Loving second
Is it a game
Until now I had the truth
Reality clear and free
You clouded my world that night
When you offered your lips
Leaving me with my thoughts
Again

We are all equal but we’re individually different
and able to reach the impossible if we try.

© Copyright 2003 Bradly Stott - All Rights Reserved
A Romantic Heart
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1 posted 2003-10-31 02:31 AM


Very powerful!

~ARH

True poets don't write with the ink of quill or pen, but with the ink of their heart~

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2003-10-31 04:12 AM


If she offered and you wanted thats good...James
passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-10-31 04:19 AM


beautiful write for a beautiful lady
ambrish
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4 posted 2003-10-31 07:40 AM


You clouded my world that night
When you offered your lips
Leaving me with my thoughts
Again...
   very passionate.

BluesSerenade
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5 posted 2003-10-31 10:57 AM


You clouded my world that night
When you offered your lips

Understandably so...
Wonderful writing,  Ringo~


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6 posted 2003-10-31 11:18 PM


Ringo~
Lovely memories penned~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
     noles1@totcon.com     

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7 posted 2003-10-31 11:34 PM




(smiles) Oh Bradly, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I'm so happy for you and may Michelle bring you great joy and many special memories! (big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bradly, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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8 posted 2003-11-01 07:39 PM


This is a lovely write.  Heartfelt and touching.  I wish you all the best.
Bye,
Diane

littlewing
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9 posted 2003-11-02 11:17 AM


Brad?

this IS the key you hold:

Friendship first  Loving second

I am loving watching you there
*smile*
xxoo

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Saluting with misty eyes
10 posted 2003-11-03 12:05 PM


ARH- Thanks for the kind words.

James- She actually took!!  lol Thanks.

Passing Shadows- Thank you. I do happen to think she is very beautiful... now if she would only believe it.

Ambrish- Thank you.

Blues- Thank you very much.

Marge- Right back atcha.

Noah- Always a gentleman. Thanks again.

Diane- From you this means the most of all. You are really to beautiful for words.

Sue- Thanks. And all this from the first date in 2 years, huh?  lol

We are all equal but we’re individually different
and able to reach the impossible if we try.

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