Alteration - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Open Poetry #29

Alteration

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-10-30 10:46 AM

Alteration

I had
a moment

it broke

fell from its
perfect place
in grace
landing on
just the angle
to shatter
leaving no
piece recognizable

"Tough times never last...tough people do." carol gardner

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-10-30 11:30 AM

This hurts. It's so very real.

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

2 posted 2003-10-30 01:09 PM

Feeling a little scrambled?

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-10-30 01:12 PM

I have moments like that

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

4 posted 2003-10-30 03:33 PM

I've felt this...

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

5 posted 2003-10-30 04:11 PM

hugs & hurt

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

6 posted 2003-10-30 08:57 PM

yup

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

7 posted 2003-10-30 09:13 PM

yup

enjoyed

pandonov
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence

8 posted 2003-10-30 11:39 PM

awe

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

9 posted 2003-10-31 02:43 PM

And those crystal moments are like hand-blown glass...each so unique there is no possibility of a replacement. Feel for you here -- I've had a few of those too.

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
______________Ratleader______________

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.